I am The Bad Guy

I am The Bad Guy

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Author: Akbarreads
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Due to an event that shocked most of the powerhouse society. Akkar had been kicked to the streets with empty pockets. As it hit the bottom line of his father.



At present, it has been 3 years since Akkar started living as a mercenary, and an infamous assassin in the shadows.

But now that he is entering the apprentice grade in Merlin Institute of Multi-realm. He is qualified for multi-realm travel.

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Let's follow Akkar into the multi-realms where he starts his path towards dominance.

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My first ever story please leave plenty of comments so I can adapt and learn as I write. The first chapters may be shorter but the length will increase as I write.

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Okay. I've only read the first chapter. It didn't particularly grab at me- the hook was okay and I had a problem with the conversation between the MC and his mother. That problem is that I don't know if she's in the room OR is she telepathically talking to him... or something else. And it wouldn't hurt to give some more descriptions in your story. I wish you good luck and good story telling.

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