Well, so far it's pretty good. There aren't many grammatical errors, the stability of the chapters is also good, I can't talk too much about characters and the story as it still only has 6 chapters, but it's progressing well. About World Background, apparently you decided to create an original background world, and it's quite interesting and original, apart from the obvious references.
Keep it up!
Welcome to my Swamp!
Well, so far it's pretty good. There aren't many grammatical errors, the stability of the chapters is also good, I can't talk too much about characters and the story as it still only has 6 chapters, but it's progressing well. About World Background, apparently you decided to create an original background world, and it's quite interesting and original, apart from the obvious references. Keep it up!