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It's too rushed to enjoy the scene, the mc feels emotionless without a distinct characteristics, i don't really have a problem with the grammar it's just the dialogue feels dull which makes it kinda boring.......

Honestly, my problem is that the story feels too bland. It progresses too fast. The characters really don't have that much feeling as if they're just dolls. A backstory similar to many other stories on this platform. World background is just normal My Hero Acadamia, it'd be more interesting if you added some twists to it. Only reading around 1 chapter and a half the character himself already seems edgy. Why is he always alone though? There wasn't anything that would've caused him to become a loner. As a child he would've been more social with others.

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The story is very rushed and MC seems emotionless. .

The author tries to write a sort of sociopathic character, however, the story lacks all that makes such stories intresting. Character interaction is pretty much non existent, and you could cut out all the scenes with the mc and you'd pretty much have a transcript of the bnha anime for all the difference he causes to the cannon plot line. Events just sorta happen around him, you could exchange him for the literal pile of wet cardboard that happens to be his personality and the entertainment value would remain pretty much the same.

Absolutely love it mate😀😁😂😀😂😁😀😂😁😁😂😁😂😁😍😀😂😁😍😀😂😍😁😁😀😍😁😁😃😍😀😁😀😍😁😍😀😍😍😀😍😁😍😀😍😁😍😀😍😍😁😍😀😍😍😁😍😀😍😁😍😍😀😀

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Only read chapter 1. The writing quality is so bad that its obviously a non-native English speaker is writing it. Its different to, but as bad as a Chinese to English MTL. so... unless ur really desperate for something to read, I would avoid this.

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this book I think is great because the story, the plot, the flashback, time skip and the other is really great I am happy to read this story. good luck. I will wait the other story from you. thank you for your book

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Potencial desperdiçado, o MC tem um poder muito forte mas que foi nerfado pelo bem da trama e dos personagens de MHA. Ele também tem uma personalidade estranha e sem sal, é estranho como ele age e as conversas são totalmente genéricas e parecem que estão lá apenas por que em uma história os personagens precisam conversar. A fanfic inteira parece um monólogo muito longo, chato e sem inspiração, o MC como eu disse não tem personalidade nem objetivos ele apenas existe e foi inserido na trama, ele é um péssimo personagem original por que não só não acrescenta em nada como aparentemente tudo segue o canon sem exceções, e a adição de mais OC foi feita de forma apressada e ilógica Sinceramente como eu disse no começo isso foi um potencial desperdiçado