He transmigrated to God Valley 38 years ago, becoming a hunted slave. By chance, he was rescued by Whitebeard and became the first crew member of the Whitebeard Pirates. Due to a system and a promise made to Whitebeard, he was not allowed to take action until the Summit War.
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Shameless Review!!! Whitebeard is the GOAT!!. I'll sometimes edit the dialogue and such to make it less Chinesy. Here is the raw 海贼:在白团签到三十年我无敌了
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i love one piece fanfic that the MC join whitebeard
27 chapters in which nothing has happened the canon changed absolutely nothing and if in Marineford it remains the same it would be one of the most garbage fics I have read [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Mantap mantap mantap.... Love it love it love it... Just read it .......................................................................................................................................,
Would change my rating depending on how the Marineford War is going to end. Somehow "fate" is keeping Blackbeard alive and MC not being able to find Ace somehow. Starting to feel like Ace and Whitebeard are still going to die at this point because of "fate" as Author likes to phrase it.
UNIQUE It's different, Fast paced but okay !! I hope author doesn't drop this fic.
It could be good, but maybe it won't. Too early to tell with this fic with just 30 chaps. But here's why I gave the low rating. - Too rushed -The overly mysterious vibe didn't work out for mc -Not interfering with the future? Buuuulllshit. Author's just lazy imo or too scared to derail canon. (May change tho. If Teach still kills the guy then this proves my point) -Romance is nonexistent. Mc was drained of character when he decided to phase out. Too boring and honestly just feels forced.
Start is good but by chapter 22 it becomes dull. Mc is in some kinda mood that ruins everything. He believes that he doesn’t deserve happiness and he should not be with someone or they will also be sad.
Personally, one of the best. Translator? Or Author? Either way, please continue till the end. The fact that this isnt some kind of FanFic power fantasy aura farming #1291 book like the many others out there is refreshing. Stones will always be coming ur way.
This was a real surprise for me. I really liked it. So basically, this about a reincarnator who got a check in system that gives him a strong power every 10 years. the story so far (29) chapters is a prelude to the real story, meaning that mc is watching whitebeard crew grow u til Whiteboard's death, and only then will he be strong enough to continue the whiteboard legacy as the first mate of Newgate. it was really well written, you could feel the family bonding of each crew member. 8.8/10 stars. I'm only sad that there are no more chapters
currently at chp 160, it's enjoyable despite the flaws. It took a long time for MC to be strong and even when he got stronger he was too passive.
the story completed from the raw, so if TL able to complete the translation then everyone should able to reach the final chapters. anyway, this is fanfic or au using a manga/anime that everyone knows and firmly established, so of course the story will be different. but the logic behind imu/im, joyboy, nika and everything else that happens in the manga/anime is good enough for me. thank you for TL for the translation and thank you author for the great fanfic if you ever read this review.
First time seeing an MC joining Whitebeard pirates. So far its good. Haven't really made any changes to the story as of yet. But it's still too early to say more might comeback and change later.