30 Years in Whitebeard’s Crew, I Became Invincible

Shameless Review!!! Whitebeard is the GOAT!!. I'll sometimes edit the dialogue and such to make it less Chinesy. Here is the raw 海贼：在白团签到三十年我无敌了

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27 chapters in which nothing has happened the canon changed absolutely nothing and if in Marineford it remains the same it would be one of the most garbage fics I have read [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

i love one piece fanfic that the MC join whitebeard

Poorly written characters and boring story development. I don't understand the MC. He talks much like an old man who is in control but does shit about it. Not recommended

Mantap mantap mantap.... Love it love it love it... Just read it .......................................................................................................................................,

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UNIQUE It's different, Fast paced but okay !! I hope author doesn't drop this fic.

Start is good but by chapter 22 it becomes dull. Mc is in some kinda mood that ruins everything. He believes that he doesn’t deserve happiness and he should not be with someone or they will also be sad.

Normally, I don't mind when the transmigrator doesn't change too much. But the MC literally didn't change ANYTHING until Marineford. He wasn't even known as the strongest member of the crew after Whitebeard or whatever and did everything to make sure no one knew who he was in the crew. He went from an extrovert to introvert for literally no reason.

It could be good, but maybe it won't. Too early to tell with this fic with just 30 chaps. But here's why I gave the low rating. - Too rushed -The overly mysterious vibe didn't work out for mc -Not interfering with the future? Buuuulllshit. Author's just lazy imo or too scared to derail canon. (May change tho. If Teach still kills the guy then this proves my point) -Romance is nonexistent. Mc was drained of character when he decided to phase out. Too boring and honestly just feels forced.

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