This story is about a human falling for the Queen on monsters. Though the rulers of the world don't want this to last. The Queen and her Human are stronger together.
Definitely an interesting premise! The plot and characters are intriguing so far, but! A lot of typos, basic grammatical errors, and missed punctuations, and sometimes it feels like the story could be narrated better so hopefully you fix that! lots of potential in this story! I recommend using grammarly(you don't have to pay) to fix most of your issues!! a good read overall?
Definitely an interesting premise! The plot and characters are intriguing so far, but! A lot of typos, basic grammatical errors, and missed punctuations, and sometimes it feels like the story could be narrated better so hopefully you fix that! lots of potential in this story! I recommend using grammarly(you don't have to pay) to fix most of your issues!! a good read overall?