Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand.
You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
4 years ago
2
MASTERT00N
good enough I guess[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
4 years ago
1
doomedtl
Although the writing is unpolished, the story moves along quickly and holds nothing back in brutality. The world is intriguing. My biggest issue is that I do not get a sense of the characters' personalities.
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
good enough I guess[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Although the writing is unpolished, the story moves along quickly and holds nothing back in brutality. The world is intriguing. My biggest issue is that I do not get a sense of the characters' personalities.