Even though the story is still going on, I thought I'd write a review, as no one else has done yet (except the author!).
So, this starts out possibly a little rough, certainly quite extreme, but then it settles down into a smooth story, and still extreme! I can see it wouldn't be for everyone, but if you give it a chance there's not just titillation, but an actual story there, which you don't find all that often on this site.
TBH, I started reading this cos I liked one of the author's others on here, and just got sucked off... er, in.
Well worth reading, if you can handle it!
3 years ago
7
Neil_H
This is a depraved, twisted tale, and you must be a sicko to read it.
If I say so myself. 😉
Read one of my other stories of you aren't up for deviant action.
3 years ago
9
Emo_Coffee_3285
I am suprized that I liked it. Im curious how many resurictions there will be this book could be endless the way its writen.
I read all the Updates in four hours im sad now. I feel like the Main caracters almost needed more Story of their old lives, yet they cant go back so to leasen the tramas it makes since they would make the Best of it it would be Best to forget. it kinda felt like a speed run reading bet if I had a quiz, I would proply butcher every name.
especially the Main character, but I know her/him sinsirely loved lovers name ( not Telling read to find yourself). Their feelings are sweet and from just the Main pov, it would of made the temperary separation more sad if I knew how they both felt. setting background felt lacking in Detail but Was just a quick thought, the plot kept moving not a big Deal.oh sorry that was alot of spelling mistakes.
Even though the story is still going on, I thought I'd write a review, as no one else has done yet (except the author!). So, this starts out possibly a little rough, certainly quite extreme, but then it settles down into a smooth story, and still extreme! I can see it wouldn't be for everyone, but if you give it a chance there's not just titillation, but an actual story there, which you don't find all that often on this site. TBH, I started reading this cos I liked one of the author's others on here, and just got sucked off... er, in. Well worth reading, if you can handle it!
This is a depraved, twisted tale, and you must be a sicko to read it. If I say so myself. 😉 Read one of my other stories of you aren't up for deviant action.
I am suprized that I liked it. Im curious how many resurictions there will be this book could be endless the way its writen. I read all the Updates in four hours im sad now. I feel like the Main caracters almost needed more Story of their old lives, yet they cant go back so to leasen the tramas it makes since they would make the Best of it it would be Best to forget. it kinda felt like a speed run reading bet if I had a quiz, I would proply butcher every name. especially the Main character, but I know her/him sinsirely loved lovers name ( not Telling read to find yourself). Their feelings are sweet and from just the Main pov, it would of made the temperary separation more sad if I knew how they both felt. setting background felt lacking in Detail but Was just a quick thought, the plot kept moving not a big Deal.oh sorry that was alot of spelling mistakes.