Devil's Collar

First of all, do not read this story if you're still living with your parents. It actually goes beyond the R rating into the land of NC-17. Second, this plot is absolutely wild. If you don't mind the minor grammatical and sentence structure errors, this is a pretty interesting and entertaining read.

This story is really mature, yikes. I wasn't ready for that. But all in all, it's definitely an interesting concept. Not my favorite tone and not the kind of story I would generally read to be honest. Stability of updates seems to be solid, world development is good, but character design could use some work imo. I feel like the characters are just doing what they are doing and we aren't getting to know them enough as individuals. But I encourage this author as well as any others to keep writing and pursuing their dreams. We all get better with time and experience but the story is definitely interesting. Writing quality is good overall, but I did notice a few minor errors.

Overall : This has some mature contents in them and its not for kids who are under 18 beware. But this is a good read about reincarnation! Writing quality : It was good but i feel that the pace was just a little fast but it was still understandable! Updating : its constant, it would be great if there were more chapter to it!! Characters : the character prakash is being reincarnated into a new world to re-live his life which was interesting. The AI was also a good idea to the story~ World background : there wasn’t much things related to the background that i see but it was okay! Still understandable! My thoughts : This story to me personally was a interesting read, i just started with the first chapter and the next few minutes im already at the last chapter, that was how hooked it got me. This book has the potential to soar and hope you keep up the good work author!! ☺️

Always been a big sucker for reincarnation stories(I'm writing one myself)! This one has a lot of potential and it seems the author is confident in the story they are trying to tell. Give this one a shot!

Please do read the maturity warning! This is quite a read for the beginning chapters! Reincarnation stories are always a fun read! This one did an amazing job with setting up the story!

First thing first, this isn't for kids so any underage kid shouldn't be reading this. Coming to novel, the story goes fast there's this pace to the story that you feel while reading it. Which for some can feel too fast and for some it may feel appropriate as it keeps you at the edge of your story. But I do believe that there can be more. I liked the plot and I the way it is going. With some work this can be a really great novel and I do see potential in it! Keep up the good work :)

What can I say about Devil's Collar? Well, I'll start with this. If you're under the age of 18, you shouldn't be reading it. No way, no how should you get past even the first chapter. This is not a story for children. It's not a story for prudes either, so consider your own boundaries in regards to sexual content before reading this webnovel. With that disclaimer dispensed with, let me start with the good. Devil's Collar is followers the adventure of a man done wrong. Humiliated by his wife and the man he respected most in the world and made to believe that his children weren't is, the story begins with Prakash (Herefor known as the MC) committing suicide. Upon death, he's brought before who I can only assume is some form of demon and given the opportunity for revenge and reincarnation. Accepting the offer, if a little reluctantly, he is reincarnated into a world of cultivation, but there's an issue. He can't cultivate. At least he wouldn't be able to cultivate without the assistance of his obligatory cheat, the devil's collar. A sentient device that allows the MC to siphon ki from other characters. The only issue being... Well, he has to f**k them first. That's the world of Devil's Collar, and I think you'll know instinctively if that world's for you. The love scenes are not shied away from. They're detailed and expanded on. No euphemisms are employed in these scenes, even when you really think they ought to be. It's quite possible the detailed, um... shall we say, passion? Sure. It's quite possible that the detailed passion may come off as somewhat gratuitous, but that's a question for your own sensibilities. What isn't in question is that the world we're placed in shows a lot of potential for a thrilling, and at times, saucy, experience. Now, while the writing is rather good. It's clear, simple, and it's easy to understand what's happening at any given time; it's not without its flaws. The most noticeable of which being that the author will often slip from the past tense, in which most of the story is told, into the present tense. These tense shifts are quite jarring to deal with as they break up the flow of the prose. Another thing I found jarring is that in chapter three, when the author writes the exposition for the MC's inherited life, he breaks the fourth wall, and therefore, my immersion from the story. It only happened once in the eight chapters that are currently available, but it is something the author should be aware of to fix so that he can improve on this work. With that said, do I think you should read Devil's Collar? Well, if my previous disclaimer is noted and not a problem for you, then Devil's Collar is the well-written adventure, with no shortage of naughtiness, for you

The story and concept are good, but if you describe this world in more detail, it would be much better. Considering it's the beginning of the novel, it has a lot of potentials to unfold. Keep it up.

As a person who enjoys reincarnation stories, I think this one is definitely worth your time! Tragedies always bring interesting twists to stories and this one has a lot of potential, give it a read!

A fresh interesting take on a reincarnation story! The writing is pretty good although the pace does seem a little rushed up to where I read. The story keeps you engaged and I would highly recommend! Keep it up author!