Loki Leonhart is the second son of the Leonhart family. He has riches and more and his caring and empathetic nature make him the far more popular of the two princes, in spite his brothers superior strength. But when Loki is framed for the murder of his father and his brother banishes him it will be up to him, a disgraced knight, an enthusiastic archer, a beautiful mage, a wandering samurai and a thief with nowhere else to go and the rest of his allies to clear his name and reclaim his home.
It's been good so far but I'd like to see a bit more descriptions, I feel like that's all that really holds this story back. Overall though the world building and characters have been solid so far and the story is great at character interactions.
Pretty solid so far! Great characters, setting and story. I love what little we've gotten of Sasaki so far. The only major problems are that the story isn't super descriptive sometimes but it's hardly and issue. I look forward to seeing more in the future!
I'm totally biased lol. I need to make this post longer so I'm just typing stuff to make that happen. So yeah...how's life people. Man this is- oh there it goes.
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