Coming from an impoverished village on the brink of a genocidal war, our hero escapes to live with his grandmother in Sudan,Africa. Follow along as he is thrown into the world of cultivation as he carves out his path to become a warrior noone has ever before seen.
Read till chapter 30: The story is really fast placed and not many things are not explained in detail. Though some things may seem to be rushed because of this, it is not a reason to drop the novel. The novel is a good casual read for me and has its own little charm.
I'm really liking the main character development and journey you become stronger. Also in find the world building to be cool and the other side characters
The book has a lot of potential, instead of same type of characters, we can follow a different version of the cultivation world this time, from someone's eyes who literally had nothing, and only seemed to want a good life
This is an unique take for a cultivation book. It's rare to see an African main character in a cultivation novel. So this should be interesting.
So far I'm liking the story, overall the writing quality is sufficient but can be better . Also the world building and character description is good So far its getting interesting.
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