The heart of the marked
Two stars that were born in the same time and night, under the same sky but in different worlds. A boy who brought the heaven over the Abasaba Empire and a girl who brought nothing but warmth over the poor family in the Northern part, outside of the Empire's walls. An Empress who is thirsty for power and blood and a mother who died in vain just so her name could be used again.
"Your name will be Cassarius. Just as the name holds, you'll bring the courage, luck and justice over our people. Lead them with pride and hold the guards up, for you are the one who keeps the water calm."
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"We'll call you Amelia. When your name will be on people's lips, it will sound just like a violin symphony. As your name holds, you'll the truth and behind the guard of the lead your place will be. Keep everyone warm and show them the meaning behind faith."
Had some parts were i can not understand , so hopefully you work on it. Other than that its a solid story. i am just trying to be honest here- no offence.
my favourite part was the 2 stars appearing on the sky and clerk realising that there is a fated pair for the child. i was very enchanting , love to read more, so waiting for more chapters.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
the plot is very captivating and the engaging, i kept reading and realised there was only 2 chapters. waiting for more chapters and the language was quite simple. a book worth reading .