The Dark Immortal Prince
Author: Athena_Flame
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After being forced to leave the only home she had ever known at the ripe age of 16, Yume was stuck fending for herself. Now she is a secretary at a lovely getaway before an unexpected turn of events occurs.
Yume's life continues to get more and more complicated as the feeling of being trapped only grows stronger with time, unable to escape her inevitable fate.
"I finally found you, my love." That voice that resonated throughout my entire body, that familiar and disturbing aura…Yet, why do I feel so drawn to him? It's as if I'm a moth being pulled towards the light.
I can't help but feel safe…And yet, I feel so lightheaded. "I can never let you go again. You will be mine once and for all. you will be mine once more".
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Hey there. I am happy I found your book. The plot is amazing. I love most about the mystery in the story. Drop more chapters. Keep the good work up
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Nice book. Despite beinga male, i like this story with a female lead, that should suffice that this book is really nice. The Mc, is strong in terms of will, as she has survived the lonliness, which people become prey to, yet she has flaws. A book which has a mc with flaw and weakness, meaning the mc has potential to grow. For me it's a nice read. I can always handle a few mistakes in writing and typos, as i know how difficult it is to write a nice chapt (Winces while remember my own work) Author, keep up, i am here to support you. And kali too!
The dark immortal prince is certainly a unique take on the genre. The characters are interesting and mysterious, keeping the readers till the very end. The dark and eerie atmosphere further solidifies the plot of the story. The only quip I have which reduced my rating from 5 stars are the grammatical errors, though, readers should keep in mind that as we progress these reduce by a great extent. Overall, an enjoyable read, looking forward to the new chapters.
I'm giving this novel 5 stars. Despite English not being the 1st language, the author did a good job expressing his ideas. The story is interesting. I like how the female main character has flaws and is not overpowered. There's a riveting history behind it, and I can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
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A great book. The book definitely has potential. So far the updates are daily. As for the grammar, there are no mistakes that I can spot so the story reads fluently. Anyways anyone who's reading this review do give the book a read and leave a review to support the author.
I've read the first few chapters. The story features a well-structured POV. The monologue and scenes are crafted well. The grammar is in point. This novel has a darker theme so try it if you're into that!