Marvel : Different Peter Parker

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Wish fulfillment stories are not usually a trope that is about good writing. Usually it's mostly about bringing forth a vision of the author's, and this author has chosen to unify a large selection of world's and alter a large selection of stories into one. Reincarnated as Peter Parker, use of Haki, powers from Bleach. Story feels very rushed as well, as events that could be slowed down are explained in passing as if it is not important. The grammar can be excused because english is not the author's first language. However the switch from first person to third person is quite jarring and occurs haphazardly.

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Why tha ghelm would you claim that youre fixing grammar in the story even though it still sucks. Not only youre stealing other people works to satisfy your ego as a "creator", you dont even put any effort into it.

This may be the worst grammar, spelling, sentence structure and storytelling I have ever read. Wow. This may be a perfect example of telling and not showing.

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Interesting ideas but not much else. It's about Peter Parker but I'm not sure why. Disregard the quality of the writing or story, it feels like a basic Chinese web novel. Every character feels out of place in a Marvel story, or western story for that matter. Fine to read if you have time to kill I guess.

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What can I say other than be very disappointed. From chapters 1 - 3 I can already see bad starting golden finger and MC had no brains. From chapters 4 - 5 where I dropped because of boredom.

Atrocious grammar, I couldn't even make it through a single chapter. .......................................................................

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Went downhill when he put JL in here plus the writing is barely average. The plot is a mess. There's nothing good here. Most of stuff here is FORCED, there's no character development etc.

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Honestly this is a strong meh. I am not one to review if its an average book but i just had to due to the wasted potential. author, I know its hard to write, i myself tried it, its bad, but u have some massive errors 1-GET GRAMMARLY, its free, or just write on google docs 2-Your MC is a xinxia/Wuxia MC, make him change his attitude and become smarter. 3-The thing about Karma made no sense, donating to people doesnt=good deed. MC just threW money, never knew were it meant, or did smth to help with hiS time and Body. Clear these, and u have more