Magical Marvel: The Rise of Arthur Hayes

It's only been 12 chapters, so I might change my mind in the future (I plan to keep reading to see where it goes). For now, I have to say that you can practically read the prompt used on ChatGPT to write this novel: "Write a badass, mysterious character who's dark and has an old-money vibe." What do you get? A robotic, bland, and not very interesting character. How do I know artificial intelligence was used to write this? It's generally hard to tell, unless the "author" is really bad at hiding it, but there are little things that show it. -Strange repetition in ideas and writing style. From chapter to chapter, there's constant repetition in certain parts of the story, for example, repeatedly saying that being excluded doesn't matter to him or the use of certain words, it's just strange. -Use of special characters, especially bold letters: it's very strange. I'd even go so far as to say it never happens that an author suddenly decides to use bold from one chapter to the next. I even reviewed the author's previous work and -surprisingly- there's not a single moment where the author use special characters. It may seem exaggerated to declare that the story is written with artificial intelligence just for those points, but the main thing is the feeling when reading. Aside from the main character, everyone, including secondary characters, feels robotic and soulless (despite being narrated by an omnipresent narrator). Aside from the description of the sensations and feelings that the characters "experience," as a reader, one doesn't empathize with any character, not even the protagonist. As I said, I plan to continue reading to see where the project goes; for now, this is the review.

What a waste, time skipping hogwarts having the mc isolated and not participating in his own story. being reminded every chapter that there's the marvel world out there so hogwarts doesn't matter. then why the f have him in the wizarding world or hogwarts at all it's poo. Many other ways you could have gone about it if you didn't want the mc in Harry Potter like him being in a different school. Soulless story telling no character interactions no dialogue or character development over the years. Just him brooding and study gooning in a corner while the world rotates. It's a waste. Over than all the above a good read not for me.

I would say it is a perfect story with one of the best writing qualities and world backgrounds that I have ever read. the story developement is also very good with the "remembering" and everything. I recommand to give it a try and read it atleast to chapter 5! After chapter 5 jugde it!

The first 35 chapters where good. MC going through all 6 years of Hogwarts, his personality and detachment to the wizard community. But God everything fell apart on 36th chapter and forward. it's like the story fell of a cliff. I get it that the author want the MC to lose his overconfidence and develop character but this felt like shitting on the first 35 chapters. MC suddenly trying to be a fanboy and trying to be cool with captain Marvel. But being coolheaded and detached until then. Straight nose dive. Hope the Author will improve and All the best.

brillant bro.i liked your other story too but ending wasnt good u left unfinished i hope u will bting good ending this one and good luck with the story.

AI slop. Using AI to enhance a story isn't wrong but when the entirety of the story is AI you get this soulless slop

I'm very disappointed with where this story is going, the irregular shift in MC's personality, the mysterious act, dropping future info which serves no purpose other than Mc's ego boost, yeah im not liking this. Though the writing quality itself is good, i would recommend the author to sort of make a seperate note of character profiles noting their traits, ambitions, personality, relationships with characters,etc this will help improve the story, maybe.

I don't even need to explain. He deliberately chose to be alone and alienated. Instead of bribing with money and mind spells to show his image as the second coming of Merlin, he was isolated as a freak that everyone avoided. His only value was seen as his exam scores. Until he was 17, the only people who spoke to him properly were his professors and the M16 supervisor. Even those who attacked him for bullying didn't verbally tease him, they just attacked him, my brother is such a lonely loser.

hard to take seriously with the endless "methodical, calculated precision" the things he does with magic are pure bs and often directly contradict what you just wrote. the first chapter starts off in 7th year only to go straight back to first. the mi6 supernatural devision.... there is no way such a thing exist without a new arms race or a civil war due to muggleborn mistreatment. just creating a muggleborn school and scooping up all those "trained and versatille mutants" would be logical. story seems decent enough, depends on what happens after hogwarts, but its also full of shit and cringe

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it's a good story, I like the MC no matter what people say.

THIS MY FRIENDS IS WHAT I CALL PEAK WRITING, BRILLIANT DEAR AUTHOR I SHALL FOLLOW THIS STORY WITH GREAT INTREST.

That shift in personality was jarring

students were literally firing avada kedavra's and crucio's inside the school and nothing happened to them......at all.