Magical Marvel: The Rise of Arthur Hayes

It's only been 12 chapters, so I might change my mind in the future (I plan to keep reading to see where it goes). For now, I have to say that you can practically read the prompt used on ChatGPT to write this novel: "Write a badass, mysterious character who's dark and has an old-money vibe." What do you get? A robotic, bland, and not very interesting character. How do I know artificial intelligence was used to write this? It's generally hard to tell, unless the "author" is really bad at hiding it, but there are little things that show it. -Strange repetition in ideas and writing style. From chapter to chapter, there's constant repetition in certain parts of the story, for example, repeatedly saying that being excluded doesn't matter to him or the use of certain words, it's just strange. -Use of special characters, especially bold letters: it's very strange. I'd even go so far as to say it never happens that an author suddenly decides to use bold from one chapter to the next. I even reviewed the author's previous work and -surprisingly- there's not a single moment where the author use special characters. It may seem exaggerated to declare that the story is written with artificial intelligence just for those points, but the main thing is the feeling when reading. Aside from the main character, everyone, including secondary characters, feels robotic and soulless (despite being narrated by an omnipresent narrator). Aside from the description of the sensations and feelings that the characters "experience," as a reader, one doesn't empathize with any character, not even the protagonist. As I said, I plan to continue reading to see where the project goes; for now, this is the review.

I would say it is a perfect story with one of the best writing qualities and world backgrounds that I have ever read. the story developement is also very good with the "remembering" and everything. I recommand to give it a try and read it atleast to chapter 5! After chapter 5 jugde it!

What a waste, time skipping hogwarts having the mc isolated and not participating in his own story. being reminded every chapter that there's the marvel world out there so hogwarts doesn't matter. then why the f have him in the wizarding world or hogwarts at all it's poo. Many other ways you could have gone about it if you didn't want the mc in Harry Potter like him being in a different school. Soulless story telling no character interactions no dialogue or character development over the years. Just him brooding and study gooning in a corner while the world rotates. It's a waste. Over than all the above a good read not for me.

brillant bro.i liked your other story too but ending wasnt good u left unfinished i hope u will bting good ending this one and good luck with the story.

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it's a good story, I like the MC no matter what people say.

THIS MY FRIENDS IS WHAT I CALL PEAK WRITING, BRILLIANT DEAR AUTHOR I SHALL FOLLOW THIS STORY WITH GREAT INTREST.

it's quite early for the review but for now it seems promising . we are still at prologue, him remembering his Hogwarts years. i support the decision of skipping it because marvel world is much bigger than HP, but it will have affects and not just be him using HP magic

AI slop. Using AI to enhance a story isn't wrong but when the entirety of the story is AI you get this soulless slop

Thought I’d write a review after seeing a couple of bumbling reviews that aren’t accurate at all. Good novel, want quicker updates. That is all. Comment underneath if you want to squabble.

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Quite good. From what I read till now it's a slow burner and it will last a lot of chapter (if the author doesn't quit). A very nice wrote fanfic, hope to see how Hayes will become in the future.

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Perfect story. I rarely see a story of this quality on WebNovel. I really enjoyed it. There are many people in the paragraph comments who are nitpicking about world structure and how he could do this or that like this isn't a ff crossover. Thank you author 🙏😁