HARRY POTTER :flash forward.

There's slow, then there's slower, then there's slowest—but this is even beyond that. It's so slow, I don't even know what to say. It's an alright story—perfect if you're just trying to turn off your brain and wait about 35 chapters for anything to happen. And when it finally does, it's over so quick you get whiplash… from how slow you're going again.

This is one of the better fan fics I have read. Give it a read.

This is one of the best HP fanfics I have read. The unique twists it places on the events of original fourth book are intriguing. The character developments are fun as heck. I highly recommend this story to every one.

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The story is really good with well strucktured plot and new thinking instead of same thing always. negative is some parts in the text gets mauled like i dont know what. it is a small mistake but it brakes the flow of reading. but it easy to ignore with the whole because it is not so often it happens

Good story, the plot isn't common and it's nicely fleshed out, Harry is very OOC, the addition of the families feels natural, and Dumbledore is kind of reactive but not out of character for me. The only negative I find to the story is that some sentences are completely mauled and separated by words; I imagine the beta reader sent the author some fixes and it wasn't checked before posting? It's a little annoying to read those parts, but beyond that, the story is good with few errors.

"The fanfic is incredible, with an engaging and well-constructed plot. The character development feels natural and captivating, making every moment meaningful. The story unfolds in a way that keeps you hooked from start to finish, with well-crafted twists and a great narrative pace. Additionally, the writing is smooth and immersive, making the reading experience even more enjoyable. Without a doubt, one of the best fanfics I've ever read!"