HARRY POTTER :flash forward.

There's slow, then there's slower, then there's slowest—but this is even beyond that. It's so slow, I don't even know what to say. It's an alright story—perfect if you're just trying to turn off your brain and wait about 35 chapters for anything to happen. And when it finally does, it's over so quick you get whiplash… from how slow you're going again.

This is one of the better fan fics I have read. Give it a read.

This is one of the best HP fanfics I have read. The unique twists it places on the events of original fourth book are intriguing. The character developments are fun as heck. I highly recommend this story to every one.

Mi reseña es un poco, bastante parcial así que si estás leyendo está reseña para ver si debería leer esta historia, te pido que no lo hagas, no te guíes por mi reseña y busques otra. Tengo dos problemas con esta historia. La primera está muy mal escrita y narrada al punto en que es difícil de leer. La segunda es que plantea un tema ya algo cliché en estás historias de Harry Potter, como son los Wesley aprovechándose de Harry pero está tan mal ejecutado que me impiden disfruta de esta historia. Creo que si el escritor volviera a describir la historia sin exagerar algunos puntos, con la visión mas clara de a dónde quiere llevar está aventura y en general mucho más definida ahora. con la práctica y experiencia que a tenido que desarrollar en estos 200 capitulos de historia. Sería una historia de muy alta calidad y muy disfrutable. Por eso me cuesta leer esta historia pero aún así la considero como algo que deberías leer a pesa de todas sus fallas

Dumbledore bashing - ☑️☑️☑️ Snape bashing - ☑️☑️ Weasley bashing - ☑️☑️ Plot holes and unsatisfactory canon development - all because of love potions The fiction was pretty good in the beginning, no repetition, sound explanations, logical developments and interesting premise. But by chapter 100 it got repetitive and rather boring imho, Harry is once again, if not the Golden Boy Pet, then he is brash, loud and swears a lot. The fourth year is absolutely endless and where I read up to, the other schools haven't even come yet...

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The story is really good with well strucktured plot and new thinking instead of same thing always. negative is some parts in the text gets mauled like i dont know what. it is a small mistake but it brakes the flow of reading. but it easy to ignore with the whole because it is not so often it happens

Good story, the plot isn't common and it's nicely fleshed out, Harry is very OOC, the addition of the families feels natural, and Dumbledore is kind of reactive but not out of character for me. The only negative I find to the story is that some sentences are completely mauled and separated by words; I imagine the beta reader sent the author some fixes and it wasn't checked before posting? It's a little annoying to read those parts, but beyond that, the story is good with few errors.

"The fanfic is incredible, with an engaging and well-constructed plot. The character development feels natural and captivating, making every moment meaningful. The story unfolds in a way that keeps you hooked from start to finish, with well-crafted twists and a great narrative pace. Additionally, the writing is smooth and immersive, making the reading experience even more enjoyable. Without a doubt, one of the best fanfics I've ever read!"

gud story like it very much ...............................................................................................................................