Rise of an Immortal
Author: Kakarot1809
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Ethan Carter was nothing special—an average man living an average life. No great ambitions, no dreams, no love, just existing.
Until a truck ended it all.
But death wasn't the end for him. Waking in a peaceful void, he met Rob, a cosmic being with a twisted sense of humor. Instead of allowing Ethan to pass on, Rob gifted him an overpowered divine elixir—the Enhanced Fountain of Youth – The Divine Spring.
Follow his jouney in the multiverse.
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Note: MC makes mistakes at first and learns from them later.
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I hate to be the downer, but here I am. The plot is very basic, and the main character is... well, a narcissist. Honestly, he’s quite boring and behaves like a 15-year-old, which is kind of sad. He sees everything in black and white, exhibiting a typical childish mentality. For example, if someone throws a punch at him, he feels the need to throw back ten punches because that’s what “cool guys” do. The writing is frustratingly annoying, it's been generated by chatGTP or whatever ai program used to "improve" the narrative. I don't have much else to say about it, except that it simply wasn’t good. Maybe I’m expecting too much? I’m not sure. Anyway, that’s just my opinion. You should try it out for yourself.! :)
Hi guys, I started new fanfic, this one is on my mind for a while and now it's here. If you have any questions or suggestions. comment them below.
this is good but there are many stories where the MC joins the X-men or enters Xavier's School. maybe if something else like Entering the Brotherhood or something. but this is good continue as you wish.
I love it. worth a read so stop checking reviews and read it.
Some confusing decision mc's making he told about omni watch and he already Anissa personality but he keep ignoring her and he take back the omni watch from Rogue what happen in I'm going to use this to trach your location thingy? but overall it's good just put more information about his decision thingy got kindy confused when he get the omni watch again
Peak though his powers are wierd sometimes they instantly make him stronger than his foes with resistance to their powers sometimes they take quite a bit of time(mainly storm)
From what I’ve read it seems pretty good you already did a little character development and the mc power is dope.👍🏻🙂 Also love rouge she’s really underused for a love interest
This story is good author. Please keep releasing chapters daily for months.............................................................................
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It's a good story with nice pacing, and his travel stories add some nice flavor in the novel. You don't feel like you're slogging through it to get to the good parts
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just love the way the plot is progressing, my suggestion would be to allow mc to have more freedom regarding his travels also hope he can bring back Diana as his love interest maybe wife…
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