Harry Potter: Back To The Future

Since this is the first chapter, I am not sure about story development and other things but the premise is good and if executed well, it would be a good fic. The writing quality is not bad but it could improve more, or maybe I am just being picky XD. If you want to improve though, I recommend using Grammarly to fix some grammar mistakes and typos. You also should try reading what you write before posting or use a reading software, and I am sure you would notice some awkward sentence structure and repeated words, but it is not unreadable. Will review again after more chapters.

This is the first fan-fiction and harry potter novel, I am reading And I am loving every single moment of it Nice writing style and story idea Thumbs up to the author

Gee! This- Hayss🤦🏻‍♀️, why doesn't anyone raise hand on this?! His writing skills is really good! And just so you know, I haven't watch or read about this Harry Potter. And because of this, I might be planning on doing it.

Early gang here!! I have seen enough harem hp fanfics with a lot of weird scenes, and for some reason, I've stumbled upon yours. I don't see any harem tag, so I'm hoping this will be good. I see time travel in the synopsis, and the first chapter is fairly decent, so this better be good!!

It's my first time reading Fanfiction! I loved your idea and storyline! AMAZING!! Though only a chapter is available, the length of the chapter was sufficient to understand your ability and the research you have done for the novel. The writing was flawless and easy to understand. Regarding the story development and stability of updates, I can't comment much, but I am confident that the author can satisfy the readers. Keep Going!!

Fun fanic you have here, It's a interestingt nod to the films with Harry being older and living with his daughter, also I didn't expect a kiss from Hermione at the end when he was on the bed. Fanfiction is interesting I will say.

The concept is good, and I love Harry Potter time travel novels to bits. Even as an ardent fan, there are few things you need to mind when it comes to webnovel. Split paragraphs, and all dialogue starts on new line. it's very hard to read on mobile otherwise. You did a good job, but could split paragraphs a little bit more.

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I recommend this book to the fans of Harry Potter. If you are waiting for more episodes of the series, this book could be its 'continuation.' Author, please, please, please, please publish more chapters.

i am restraining so much, because if i describe my favourite parts i might give some spoilers. the novel is very interesting and i enjoyed reading it. its definitely worth the time i spent.

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