It’s a decent story so far, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that need to be cleaned up. If the punctuation mistakes are fixed, then the story will be a lot easier to read. Other than that, I enjoyed the story and premise itself.
3 years ago
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Authorsan
If the author can flash out the OC character more without making him too generic the story will rock.
Overall it is good, without much plotholes uptill now with its unique concept.
It’s a decent story so far, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that need to be cleaned up. If the punctuation mistakes are fixed, then the story will be a lot easier to read. Other than that, I enjoyed the story and premise itself.
If the author can flash out the OC character more without making him too generic the story will rock. Overall it is good, without much plotholes uptill now with its unique concept.