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a year ago
6
Binolin_Pubg
I don't like the writing, it's like Shakespeare writing fanfic and two much explanation ..
a year ago
4
Gajin_Snail
good work i have nothing more to say just go olay war thunder and buy premium and give your souls to the snail
a year ago
2
DaoistGYMycr
please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem
a year ago
2
Zoro7812
this fanfic, is a thought-provoking and imaginative read that keeps you on the edge of your seat. Despite occasional verbose writing and abrupt romantic development, the novel's engaging plot, well-developed characters, and intricate world-building make it a worthwhile experience. If you're a fan of fantasy with a touch of romance and a dash of Shakespearean flair, this book is definitely worth picking up.
a year ago
2
YungnSenerity
This novel captivates with its intricate character development and immersive storytelling. The exploration of psychic battles and the manipulation of time adds depth to the narrative, keeping the reader engaged. The moral dilemmas presented are thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impact. The author's ability to create complex characters and weave them into a gripping plot is commendable.
It offers a captivating story with intricate characters and engaging themes, though it may require careful attention to fully appreciate its nuances
a year ago
2
shaluxifa
i read the bio and did his sis go with him bc leaveing such a lil girl home by herself is not safe
The story had a perfect blend of action, emotion, and suspense that kept me engaged throughout. The characters were relatable and well-developed, and the author's descriptive writing painted a vivid picture of the world they created. A truly enjoyable read that I couldn't put down!
a year ago
1
DaoistovTK5Y
The plot was engaging, the characters felt real, and the writing style was easy to follow. I found myself getting lost in the story and eagerly turning the pages to see what happens next. Highly recommended!
a year ago
1
Daoist8CuRGw
I really enjoyed this fanfic. The story was interesting, the characters were relatable, and the writing kept me engaged. I would definitely recommend giving it a read!
not bad fanfic. sometimes it feels a bit rushed but overall a 5/5 from me, good grammer, good world building and mystery surrounding the novel
a year ago
1
Enyru
author san, giving myself a 5 star because why not? If you find any errors or fault in my fault please let me know. Also things that you want me to improve on, that will be helpful
a year ago
1
KingOFMizo
A really good fanfic in my opinion, ofc it has flaws but the writing and grammer is really good for an fanfic, althought sometimes it overexplain which isnt really a bad thing, overall good fanfic
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I don't like the writing, it's like Shakespeare writing fanfic and two much explanation ..
good work i have nothing more to say just go olay war thunder and buy premium and give your souls to the snail
please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem please make it a harem
this fanfic, is a thought-provoking and imaginative read that keeps you on the edge of your seat. Despite occasional verbose writing and abrupt romantic development, the novel's engaging plot, well-developed characters, and intricate world-building make it a worthwhile experience. If you're a fan of fantasy with a touch of romance and a dash of Shakespearean flair, this book is definitely worth picking up.
This novel captivates with its intricate character development and immersive storytelling. The exploration of psychic battles and the manipulation of time adds depth to the narrative, keeping the reader engaged. The moral dilemmas presented are thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impact. The author's ability to create complex characters and weave them into a gripping plot is commendable. It offers a captivating story with intricate characters and engaging themes, though it may require careful attention to fully appreciate its nuances
i read the bio and did his sis go with him bc leaveing such a lil girl home by herself is not safe
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The story had a perfect blend of action, emotion, and suspense that kept me engaged throughout. The characters were relatable and well-developed, and the author's descriptive writing painted a vivid picture of the world they created. A truly enjoyable read that I couldn't put down!
The plot was engaging, the characters felt real, and the writing style was easy to follow. I found myself getting lost in the story and eagerly turning the pages to see what happens next. Highly recommended!
I really enjoyed this fanfic. The story was interesting, the characters were relatable, and the writing kept me engaged. I would definitely recommend giving it a read!
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not bad fanfic. sometimes it feels a bit rushed but overall a 5/5 from me, good grammer, good world building and mystery surrounding the novel
author san, giving myself a 5 star because why not? If you find any errors or fault in my fault please let me know. Also things that you want me to improve on, that will be helpful
A really good fanfic in my opinion, ofc it has flaws but the writing and grammer is really good for an fanfic, althought sometimes it overexplain which isnt really a bad thing, overall good fanfic