Transported to Naruto, starting with Zanka No Tachi.
Looking at Uchiha Itachi, who might become his brother-in-law, Yusuki grinned as he sharpened his knife, "If Izumi and Sasuke fell into a river, who would you save first?"
Ele desperta o sharigan? Porque se não então deixou ele ser um uchiha?, já que não faria diferença nenhuma para historia se ele fosse afinal ele tem zacha no tachi afinal
a month ago
4
xiram21
its pretty interesting, hopefully it will continue soon, is their any chance that you could upload two chapter daily..
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10 days ago
3
dankoku
Pretty interesting, mcs students are Izumi, kabuto, and itachi. He has a good relationship with orochimaru, and he's pretty strong.
12 days ago
3
He_Who_Remains
The story is good, but the names are so wrong it’s sometimes impossible to tell who is doing what. At this point I’m just giving up on it. Maybe I will check in later and see if the author fixed the names.
4 days ago
2
PDanac
okay extremely good story but inconsistent names and all that.
6 days ago
2
AKZALOTH
a historia é boa, mas o protagonista tem uma memória comandado pelo roteiro de forma que seja mais conveniente, fora isso, eu abandonei e considerei finalizado, quando ele foi para o mundo de bleach
4 days ago
1
Kamikaze22601
The idea and story is ok, but the author keeps on making mistakes about the characters and which abilities they have/can use/know about.
Examples:
1) Itachi base Sharingan uses Tsukuyomi
2) Hana Inuzuka is genjutsu user(Kurenai Yuhi), and has knowledge on Tsukuyomi.
3) Shikaku Nara being 4th hokage guard and has senbon in his mouth (Genma Shiranui)
This and some other mistakes honestly make me think this is AI.
Example:
Shukaku(1 tails) suddenly being from the Nara desert, makes no sense, as 1) Nara=deer and 2) Nara is a clan in Konoha and has a Nara forest. If it was just a mix up of Shikaku Nara and Shukaku, it would be an honest mistake, but making shukaku's background related to Nara seems more like an AI mixup type of mistake.
Ele desperta o sharigan? Porque se não então deixou ele ser um uchiha?, já que não faria diferença nenhuma para historia se ele fosse afinal ele tem zacha no tachi afinal
its pretty interesting, hopefully it will continue soon, is their any chance that you could upload two chapter daily.. thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty interesting, mcs students are Izumi, kabuto, and itachi. He has a good relationship with orochimaru, and he's pretty strong.
The story is good, but the names are so wrong it’s sometimes impossible to tell who is doing what. At this point I’m just giving up on it. Maybe I will check in later and see if the author fixed the names.
okay extremely good story but inconsistent names and all that.
a historia é boa, mas o protagonista tem uma memória comandado pelo roteiro de forma que seja mais conveniente, fora isso, eu abandonei e considerei finalizado, quando ele foi para o mundo de bleach
The idea and story is ok, but the author keeps on making mistakes about the characters and which abilities they have/can use/know about. Examples: 1) Itachi base Sharingan uses Tsukuyomi 2) Hana Inuzuka is genjutsu user(Kurenai Yuhi), and has knowledge on Tsukuyomi. 3) Shikaku Nara being 4th hokage guard and has senbon in his mouth (Genma Shiranui) This and some other mistakes honestly make me think this is AI. Example: Shukaku(1 tails) suddenly being from the Nara desert, makes no sense, as 1) Nara=deer and 2) Nara is a clan in Konoha and has a Nara forest. If it was just a mix up of Shikaku Nara and Shukaku, it would be an honest mistake, but making shukaku's background related to Nara seems more like an AI mixup type of mistake.