plot holes in the first 2 chapters. MC wakes up and has marks on his cheeks, knows nothing about himself and hasn't shown interest either in finding about it. The first chapter was almost all about how handsome he is.... and walking in his house in underwear . weird.
Who wakes up in a new world and just carries on with their life even in fantasy.
Also, did not read much that I could honestly say anything about but MC thinks clothes are uncomfortable.
Author please write if it's a crack-fic in the description.
3 years ago
48
Shubhamtripathi033
don't read it pretty much dumb writing with the same scenario that happened with issei and mc is dumb and he thinks with the thing between his two legs not with the one between his two ears. so many potholes in the first chapters that i wasn't able to read after chapter 5 . i was waiting for someone to write a fanfiction on cursed speech but if they would be this stupid don't write you would really disappoint me.
3 years ago
35
Kobyfate
inumaki?
3 years ago
29
Arcanemissile
I like the story so far, appreciate the way the author wrote Rias, the relationship with Akeno is kinda fast, hope that not all of the girls in the chat group join his harem, hope that mc's harem is made out of DXD characters and all the other girls are friends/ colleagues, not harem members.
3 years ago
18
Paladin_1119
So far, a very promising! I wish the author inspiration and motivation!
Just great... far more interesting than what I have been reading lately
mc isn't a just cry bitc*
power is OP but his mana reserves are dull
mc is weak and he deals it with by hiding
note: these are positive points according to me
2 years ago
1
DVD
As of chapter 17 so far so good. It is a nice change for dimensional chat to only improve existing powers and not give access to the stander haki, godslayer magic,chakra etc.
2 years ago
1
Almas_Farhan_Arnob
Good novel..but there some information missing in dxd world...like where he get money,is hus family have power like him...and mc is little weak if we talk about his physical aspect....And raven look like real protagonist (OK that was joke)....but still one of the unique fanfic...
2 years ago
1
bley
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plot holes in the first 2 chapters. MC wakes up and has marks on his cheeks, knows nothing about himself and hasn't shown interest either in finding about it. The first chapter was almost all about how handsome he is.... and walking in his house in underwear . weird. Who wakes up in a new world and just carries on with their life even in fantasy. Also, did not read much that I could honestly say anything about but MC thinks clothes are uncomfortable. Author please write if it's a crack-fic in the description.
don't read it pretty much dumb writing with the same scenario that happened with issei and mc is dumb and he thinks with the thing between his two legs not with the one between his two ears. so many potholes in the first chapters that i wasn't able to read after chapter 5 . i was waiting for someone to write a fanfiction on cursed speech but if they would be this stupid don't write you would really disappoint me.
inumaki?
I like the story so far, appreciate the way the author wrote Rias, the relationship with Akeno is kinda fast, hope that not all of the girls in the chat group join his harem, hope that mc's harem is made out of DXD characters and all the other girls are friends/ colleagues, not harem members.
So far, a very promising! I wish the author inspiration and motivation!
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Just great... far more interesting than what I have been reading lately mc isn't a just cry bitc* power is OP but his mana reserves are dull mc is weak and he deals it with by hiding note: these are positive points according to me
As of chapter 17 so far so good. It is a nice change for dimensional chat to only improve existing powers and not give access to the stander haki, godslayer magic,chakra etc.
Good novel..but there some information missing in dxd world...like where he get money,is hus family have power like him...and mc is little weak if we talk about his physical aspect....And raven look like real protagonist (OK that was joke)....but still one of the unique fanfic...
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