Everlasting Will

Good Job for writing your first chapters from this novel, I can see some small mistakes when you are trying to describe the world background, and some typing mistakes, but that don't ruin the cool story that you have wrote, I added this to my library hopefully to see improvements and to see how the story goes. Good luck!

I love itt!! The pacing of the story is really nice, doesn't feel too slow or too fast. A lot of stories require me to reread the chapter to fully understand but this one is very easy too understand. The characters are very nice and the cover art is amazing, keep up the good work!<3

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

You did a great job with the two chapters that are released, I enjoyed reading this webnovel because I could easily understand what's going on and who is who, looking forward on what's happenint next