The Title May not make any sense to the story ignore it i suck at naming shits

TAGS:RUTHLESSMC DEVILMC MULTIVERSE NOSYSTEM OPMC

DxD: Sitri Copycat

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Great idea and such but overall execution could use some work same with grammer aka capitalizing every word. story move at a very fast pace. needs to go into a bit more detail for some things. you should possibly go back and rewrite/edit a few chapters. everything else is fine.

Honest review from the author lol.............................................................................................................

its great that you choose sitri family in your fic. because few use them and not convulated.

the thing that you should know after reading your ff. was it lacks the use of periods. you just write and not end it with a period, some awkward moments, wrong informations in the fic that was very basic if you read the LN or watched the anime. some grammar errors.

i know that i'm kinda annoying. but i'm just pointing that need improvements for a better flow of the story.😊😊😊😊