Volume 2 Afterword

 

The second volume ended much quicker than I had initially planned but circumstances changed and we're about to enter Volume 3. I've done some thinking and extra lessons in English to improve what I write and post. With that said although I'm happy with the overall story, they are many parts I know I could have executed better. 

 

The biggest being, the power system;

 

The mistake I made was thinking it won't carry relevance since the real action and plot in KOL had yet to begin. For that I apologize,  with Volume 3, I'm aiming to work on my pacing and I've reworked the tiering system as shown below. I will also post it in the auxiliary volume for those to refer whenever. So, as you begin Volume 3, ignore prior knowledge concerning Tiers and some terms.

 

I will delete the message once I edit these changes into past chapters.