Dimensional Group Chat Life

‘’Let’s be like the many authors hating on Naruto and fanboying on Hinata.’’ No thanks. It’s poor writing to go for cheap ways to add girls into your harem to bash a character and make them ooc. And don’t tell me the cruel rejection was in character. The quality of the story outside of such boring ‘’plots’’ is roughly average but I’d really recommend to avoid this kind of path. Could have made it much better by having her slowly fall out of love with Naruto et and developping a romance. The chat group also seems to be mostly there to create a harem for your self-inserts, that’s another thumbs down.

So this is supposed to be a chat group story, but its actually severely lacking in character dialogue and interaction. It's honestly more of a story about your murder hobo Tatsumi Self Insert going around collecting more powers and fighting people no one really cares about. Adding more powers and violence isnt what makes a story good. The more powers the worse off it actually becomes. That's why most shounen protagonists dont actually have that many powers.

Starting alright - but feels a bit slow paced.

3s all around I enjoyed it my biggest dislike is that I thought we had a Theme going on Tatsumi who will join Empire and probably be just like Esdeath. Saeko nuff said and a Heartbroken Hinata who I'm sure snapped and then author added Ruby Rose and just ruined everything. since Ruby will be all like oh it wrong to kill this and that and blah blah.

It is so bad that I don't even have words to describe this. And this isn't even about the story, but about writing quality. it is just so hard to read, that I can't consider anything higher than two stars. I just can't understand what is written in the story. I came here to joy myself reading not to hurt my eyes.

2.4 stars for now ................................................................................................................................................

it's terribly boring and not interesting, I've read 60 chapters and I've skipped chapters very often. it was so boring. it's just awful. I am silent about a very stupid plot.

It’s legit every other chat group, I mean I love chat group ff, but I mean at least add some originality man, like literally everything in this ff s almost exactly the same as other chat group ff..

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Grammar's pretty bad. The text says a lot while actually not saying much while feeling rushed. It's like it's both too fast paced and too slow paced at the same time. That's a new level of bad writing.

just gonna say I would like to think Tatsumi is not the mc of akame ga kill because look at the name of the anime wahahaha [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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only on the second chapter and I'm not sure if I've had a stroke or it just reads all over the place. could use a lot of work on grammar and sentence structure.