Harry Potter The Noble savior
The protagonist is full of intelligence, full of charm, full of force. Follow young John who got recarnated as young 14 year old savior Harry Potter, find who he Betts all challenges and become top of the world.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and other main character are taken from original work ,I am not owner , so please follow original work.
These just fan fiction novel that I created because my favourite fantasy novel wizard king has been dropped for months, so I took inspiration and carefully read that novel so, to make related as possible. I also used starting lineup with minor changes , so if writer novel has problem by using his work as reference . please contact me I will try my best to edit it and in further chapters with increase in my experience and confidence , I will make it enline with my thoughts.
# English is not my first language , so please forgive my mistake and enjoy my first work .
This is very hard to read at times when some sections are translated poorly. Some words are misspelled or completely wrong. I suggest using a spelling and grammar checker. This is life. We learn more from our mistakes. So don't worry about past mistakes, and make improvements and move forward.
your chapters need alot of work. you have the tendency to use the improper name for something or someone. alot of your sentences just dont make any sense and it's hard to understand what your saying. then we begin to be able to read your story only to find out you took those chapters from another story and pasted them after adding minor details. Get someone to read over your chapters a fix not only you misuse of proper names but also fix your story in general so it flows with better understanding
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Hello there, Ajay_k_2683. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or per week if you are not too busy or not healthy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
well, as an author I tried my best . These is my first creation . My english is not that good , I will try my best to emprove it. so, please at least try to read it and give me feedback , It means a lot.