Transmigration: From baby to teenager

As the author, I can say this novel is better compared to my first novel. I can't say much about it but I di appreciate those who have reviewed this book. Thanks.

A good take on the genre though I think yours was unique! It was a new kind of transmigration! Well, the MC is likable and her character was shown well. I must say I am rooting for her. Good luck in the future! Though it was brighter in yours 😉

4.8/5, just because your updates are really really slow, But don't be demotivated 'Cause the story is awesome. It was my first time reading something like this, which was pretty interesting for me. I loved the character, thought it was pretty hard to relate with it but overall amazing work. Keep doing what your doing, hope to see more!!

This idea was something new to me. I loved it. If it was the other way around (Teenager to child) I can predict the story to some extent, but this, I have no idea what'll happen next and I love it. Can a child handle the life of a teenager? Not to mention the problems in her new life! Well, that's what makes the story and the MC interesting. 5/5 for the effort and creativity. Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!

First of all your grammar is perfect (Which is definitely not always the case with novels on this sit). Your main character is too perfect. Makes it harder to relate to her. You need to give her some flaw, or personal problem. That way she will not only be more relatable but have room to grow by the end of the story.

I am sad for the adoptive family and i am sorry for their loss. This is a great book and beginning. I hope Lilith's life get better soon. I am rooting for her. Great book author...more updates, please!

This story is kinda dark but it's really good! It's well-written too! I wouldn't mind seeing more. It has an interesting premise and setting.

I love this novel! The writing is pleasant to read, I hope the author will have time to finish this quality work! ....................................................................................

I like the main lead. even though at first she is perfect and brilliant, she undergoes something that can make even supergirl scream and yet she is facing it head on, Kudos author...................................................................................................... ................................................................................................................

i like the idea of your story it is really great and i hope you will continue it and i also recommend everyone to like it collect it in their reading list

A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. There are little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy read. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]

I only read one chapter and its already lookin good. ..................................................................................................

The idea of the story was brilliant, it's unique and catching. Though there are errors on which I can't seem to find anything wrong with the MC that could make room for her growth. Also, on the first chapter, you narrated on the get-go, for novels, a phrase, narration from the MC's perspective or a dialogue should be able to make the readers curious. For example, some or should I say mostly, series and movies started from the middle of the story, as the serie or movie continue, both past and future is tackled to provoke the watcher on continuing to read, and continuous twists and cliffhangers come forward by every end to encourage the watchers to read. The same goes for writing. The first part of the novel should hook the readers by ✨ curiousity✨ It's the strongest weapon an author can have. But I commend you for the gammar and writing skills though it still needs a little shaping, it will be honed to be a better piece and maybe a masterpiece itself. Keep slaying, author!

Although the premise is interesting, there are several things to improve from the get-go, for example, her first life seemed to be relatively peaceful, her second life is more active and supposedly violent, but nothing is shown of how she was trained, what did she learn to end up disrupting her mother's mission or business, you also need to use more pronouns to improve your writing, good luck!