Above Extraordinary

The world you have placed your characters in is creative, dangerous and inspired! I wasn't really captured by your synipsis but enjoyed reading it none the less. Keep up with the hard work and looking forward to seeing more!

Well to be honest here, the plot is amazing and the element of mystery that you put is amazing. I can picture every word which I find lovely. Hope you continue!

Finished 3 chaps till,and I'm so satisfied by the authors writing sense. Character design is nice World Background: Excellent Story plot: Excellent Go ahead author...[img=recommend] Looking forward to your story

if I could rate world background 10 stars, I would. The author really took his time to describe the world, and the writing is very good😭😭😭. the plot is amazing I want to see where this lead to.

first I don't know where the plot this story will bring. but I read chapter by chapter. I an little understand what the plot is. It is so great, my the character development isn't yet progressed. But I understand. I like this story. good job for Author. Always keep the spirit.

The plot is amazing, I could feel the tension because of the good writing on some scenes. It really feels like your in the world that the author created. Overall it's good.

The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read

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Overall good. it has a new nuance. quite captivated by the way the story goes. I like the little girl btw, cutie. I hope she will appear often.