come on

come on

Sci-fi4 Chapters10.4K Views
Author: Ro_Baek
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LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINK

The plot is good but in the chapters the author had inconsistencies and the flow was off there were some thing that were Ununnecessary but those parts could bring more prospect’s to your novel if u word it right and have the right flow What I do is think like I’m a reader I want to read something that keeps me hooked and flows easily while also keeping all the complicated and unique parts It’ s still a good read but just make it flow and you’ll see the collections and views roll in

3 years ago
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Lancee
Lancee

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

3 years ago
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