Please update the next chapter please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭The story is cool 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
2 years ago
2
MoistCow
This has to be the cringiest but funniest thing I've read in years! This is such an amazing story/idea. Fix the writing quality a bit. I would like to rewrite this, but I need the authors pass first :)
a year ago
1
Brady_Canoza
I love this story and all....but why did all the chapters suddenly disappear?
10 months ago
0
Daoistf5GT1L
Qlwlskksksksksksks Qlwlskksksksksksks the first thing I've seen has a bit weird to be w me in my work when we're waiting waiting when we're watching it and the arrow to be used in white with white with a pair when
a year ago
0
lobsxz
pls go back to upteateing................
2 years ago
0
M_Shaz_3A
plot is very interesting... a little slow paced for me I guess... but it's OK as long as it is interesting... all the best and hope for more release... thank you 😊
3 years ago
0
Casual7
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
3 years ago
0
lalithkumar
the concept is great and new.
there are less fanfics in this genre.
I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story.
I really enjoyed other than that part.
low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story.
well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
3 years ago
0
BrownOptometrist
Tough only 8 chapters has been released so far, this is still a very good fanfic and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Please update the next chapter please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭The story is cool 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
This has to be the cringiest but funniest thing I've read in years! This is such an amazing story/idea. Fix the writing quality a bit. I would like to rewrite this, but I need the authors pass first :)
I love this story and all....but why did all the chapters suddenly disappear?
Qlwlskksksksksksks Qlwlskksksksksksks the first thing I've seen has a bit weird to be w me in my work when we're waiting waiting when we're watching it and the arrow to be used in white with white with a pair when
pls go back to upteateing................
plot is very interesting... a little slow paced for me I guess... but it's OK as long as it is interesting... all the best and hope for more release... thank you 😊
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
the concept is great and new. there are less fanfics in this genre. I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story. I really enjoyed other than that part. low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story. well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
Tough only 8 chapters has been released so far, this is still a very good fanfic and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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