Journey of the Fallen
A half demon and Half human called "Fallen" they have a pure dark hair and pure dark eyes, one of them is our MC, the hero Jetrin
He was betrayed by his comrades and was reincarnated in the Earth, but unfortunately he died again and he is back to his original world, he regained his past memories and vow to take revenge.
I really like it, it was nice grammar as far as i could see but could do with a little improvement. But other than that it was pretty good, I'll make sure to continue to read.
Yo, this was a pretty good read so far! I like the idea of the plot and am interested in reading more. Keep up the good work, I see a lot of potential...
The Potential for this story is great! Dont leave this as is continue to make this story the best it can be! looking forward to more chapters!