third son - Dragonball

Nice love the frost demon race in dragon ball z so PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Interesting and a great start. I hope he becomes op and toy with everyone. Idk if there’s romance but if possible have 18. Pls update more and keep up the good work!

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I loved how the story goes, you can add characters that have a balanced force rate across the galaxy and don't just turn it into a timeline because the writer of Dragon Ball is united by Goku's perspective and doesn't talk about the seventh universe as a whole. There are a group of characters in the dark to make your story interesting

ok mc personality change is bit of plot hole but good start. waiting for more chapters 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

My only problem with this fanfic is the sudden change of the mc personality. If there were more details on the mc change, it would be better. But we only got a summary of how the mc conquered his planet.

This is great! Keep it up! I hope you dont drop this!

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best DBZ fanfiction on MC as Frostdemon, and finally someone with good head. The strongest race on mortal level is finally realised by someone and Idiots say saiyan is overpowered, where goku trained indefinetly to gain his strength, whereas freiza trained a bit an became Golden Freiza