Phoebe had always thought about the night of her turning, she had hoped that she would be able to access the power of being an alpha pup, that she would be very strong, strong enough for the pack members not to look down on her as a female alpha. but that was the opposite of her situation right now.
She had always been ridiculed by all pack members , even by her father who was the alpha, all because she didn't turn when she was supposed to.
She was assumed to be an Omega just like her mom, and her father resented her for it; how would an alpha have an Omega for a heir....it was ridiculous...
Everything took another turn when she had to leave the pack..what would she face outside?......
Maybe the moon goddess has a much bigger plan for her than she could ever imagine......Maybe what she knew was not the whole story........it all began when she met the wolf from her dreams....
I am very much in love with the story line of the novel, the main character's story development is absolutely amazing ..[img=update][img=update]
From the the 2 chapters you have here, I can see that you have a good novel draft prepared,...keep up the good work...and I also think you have to improve on your character description[img=recommend]