A story about a man(writer) who is reincarnated and chosen as a villainess advisor.Where they are many twists. I want you to read a few pages before judging 
In this story you get
-A proper villainess who acts up to her role and is ruthless and cunning
-The mc who is no pushover and a non-arrogant guy.Smart mc.No simp mc
-Mc who focuses on his life and ambitions
-Kingdom building 
-Setting is in the ancient world with cultivation and without any annoying clinches.
-War. The villainess will try to conquer everything
-A lot of action 
-Good and smart villains 
-Lot of gore
-Likable villains
-Black knight 
-Spoilers

The villainess and her Advisor conquers everything.

ACTION

ROMANCE

ADVENTURE

CULTIVATION

VILLAIN

KINGDOMBUILDING

CONQUER

KILLER

SINGLEFEMALELEAD

writing quality - good and readable though there r few mistakes but nothing serious

story development - pacing is good though abrupt. needs more explaining

character design - too early to tell

update stability - need more chapters

world backgroud - need to describe the world a bit more. if you're aiming for a medieval warfare then this book, i assume, needs a lot of geopolitical descriptions or something 😂

i hope this story wont solve vrything with magic

all in all, a good read and the only major downside is the abruptness and unnatural character dialogues

dnt stop writting 👍

Really intriguing story! John is an excellent and well designed MC and Athena will be an excellent foil.

The world is really well designed and there are great ideas built up by the author.

The only critique is the grammar issues. They don’t detract from the story, but there are some stiff conversations and dialogue here and there, which is always hard to write fluidly. 

Definitely worth a read and I am excited to see where the story goes from here!

It's only four chapters so far, so way too early for a proper review, but the story line is okay so far. It's starting out kind of slow so far, and I don't really understand much of the motives yet, except that the FL wants to become powerful and to be recognized.

The MC wants to write stories without being in dangerous situations, but yet he's put himself in a dangerous situation, so it's a little confusing for me.

Like I said, the story line is a little slow, so maybe it'll explain more later. 

3.4 because I had a hard time understanding the characters motives and reasons so far.

I also feel like I can't see the world the author wants. Maybe the author wants the reader to make up the world, and that's fine, but maybe every now and then describe the environment, the noises that the MC hears, the smells, the cobwebs in the corner, etc. Just to draw the reader into the world.

Keep working hard author! Doing good! A little tweaking here and there and it'll be good.

I'm not used to writing reviews, however, I try my best.

The world and the characters are very interesting, I feel I want to know more about them and want to see their progress with excitement.
Overall I found this one very enjoyable! I can recommend it!

The only thing that kicked me out of my daze was the grammar mistakes, and not the minor ones.
Somehow I felt a word is missing, also I felt a whole sentence missing too.