TANG_YU_PING_Moe

"Where am I" 
She looked around and shouted at the top of her lungs.
"HELP"
"HELP"
A ball of light crashed into her body.
Then she felt suffocated and a screen appeared. 
[System parasite commencing]
She felt pain like never before.
[Parasite installing.......Succeeded]
[Gaining control of soul.......Succeeded]
She suddenly was in a black room and saw a screen.
She wanted to move but was stuck as if a mountain was pressing on her. 
A ball of light suddenly lit and the pressure subsided.
[System commencing extermination of soul]
Dread washed over her body as she saw a small child about the size of a six year old. She couldn't see through the veil of death as every step the child stepped, she felt closer to the valley of death. 
"Please have mercy on me"
"No" 
The child suddenly used her arm to cut the woman in half.
The women still alive tried to fight back by pouncing on the child but to no avail as the child cut both her arms. 
Feeling the grasp of death grabbing on her neck. She smirked and chuckled.
"Its time for your death"
"Oh reall-"
The woman blew up with unrelenting force. The power started to disintegrate the child.
"How"
The last words of the child.
The women smiled at the dying child as information flowed through her mind.
She fainted.
[System 'Law System' has died in a battle of existence]
[World System shall give inheritance to relative.......Error] 
[Law system shall be exiled so that soul shall not gain power.......Error]
[Partial Law system is being reabsorbed into world system.......Success]
[ERROR ERROR]
[Compensation is needed. Transmigration and unparalleled talent is given as compensation.] 
[World shall be about cultivation as high compensation is needed.]
[Unparalleled talent shall be given as title {Unsurpassable martial weapon master}]
[World system shall not allow this lowly being to have power so heavy restrictions shall be given]
[Lowly being cannot cultivate in anyway.]
[Lowly being shall lose everything.]
[Processing and implementing...... Success]
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"Where am I" A child with a voice of a hourse voice sounded.
The child covered her mouth and immediately tried to find something to reflect on as she used a puddle, a face of a child about 3 years old but she knew she was 5 and seemed like this from malnurisment. The most mouth opening thing is that she was ugly, she seemed comparable to a donkey. She was shocked but suddenly information resurfaced and she cursed at all the information she remembered. 
She looked up and cursed in low murmurs as she laid down on the cave floor and slept as she was exhausted from her mind and soul.

(Hi, author here, first time writing, so the farther we go the more story concepts I try to add in the story, leading to this pile of burning stupidity called 'I can change the core principle.' 

Strap on your big boy/girl pants as you get absolutely violated by my terrible writing so I sincerely advice you to be the M that you never knew you were. Strip down and get whipped.)

(On a serious note, this whole novel is just a draft for a larger novel so if you find people becoming concepts being too ridiculous. You know what to do...... Flame me in the comments with one star reviews.)

Alternative Synopsis
Have You thought about the profoundness of a concept? What is a concept? It's a idea. Are there any limits to an idea? Non but physical. Then, are there ways to bypass the physical boundaries of your limited imagination? Spiritually. 

This is a novel exploring the idea to live a concept that is intricately tied to infinity. 

Is a system Ai from all those popular books the manifestation of an AI or are they the sad byproduct? I don't know. 

What is a Law? A concept fully formed. An idea fleshed out for the world to see. So when a cultivator bends a Law, those it follow the past or the future or the present. After all, an idea is something out the bounds of time and space. A idea is discovered not created. It is already existing.

I can change the core principles

'I am still thinking but I want to strip him and leave him in the forest.'


'Is that not dangerous as you are my soul and what's a will?'


< Ai Lim, I thought you came from earth? So why do you not know about these common stuff?>


'Well, I was too busy making a galaxy level business and being a dictator of a couple of planets. I was also very old at the time. I couldn't keep up with those trends and novels of the young'uns.'


<Wait, was that your past life. I never questioned you when you did it but why did you seal your memories. The memories that were not bound to your soul.>


'To not effect me, but moving on. Is it dangerous?'


Tang Nuan was suspicious of the sentence as she felt there was a deeper meaning to those words but pushed it to the back of her mind as it was not the time to think of these things.


<No, its not. I am just putting my and your will inside the body. Making him our slave. Think of our wills as the controller, the body as a character and us as the character. Though we have to control his mind first.>


'I thought I had no techniques for the mind.'


'So you made a mind technique but what is the rank.'


As she stood up and got closer to the unconscious man. She stood next to him. 


<Don't worry, Ai Lim I will take things from here you just need to place your hands on his face.>


She kneeled down and placed her hands on his face. She was also using her intent to cover her body.


After that the system seemed to disappear. 


A man was walking through a hallway. The hallway had many doors and words. But he was walking unconcerned in the direction of some kind of light. 


Suddenly, he felt a intruder and his eyes widened with surprise. 


"WHO ARE YOU? WHY HAVE YOU COME? ANSWER ME!!!"


The man yelled with unrelenting rage as the hallways started to distort. 


A bright orb flew out of those distortions. 


The light was naturally Tang Nuan and Ai Lim's Wills. It glowed brighter as the hallway started to crack as if reality was disappearing. Though it was very slow. The man was still frightened out of his wits and immediately tried to retaliate.


The mind was very important as important as a cultivators life. As without the mind a person can't function as a living being and repairing the mind of a cultivator was difficult even for those at higher realms.


The man shouted to no avail as the cracks were still appearing. 


The will shone brighter as the man smirked. 


As an arc of light was flying towards the orb. The orb started to expand and flew towards the arc. As the orb phased through the arc as it flew to the man and swallowed him. 


The man started to scream in agony and disappeared a few seconds later.


In the physical world a small girl was squatting on the ground touching the face of a man. 


'Tang Nuan, how much longer do you need.'


Will battle