TANG_YU_PING_Moe

"Where am I" 
She looked around and shouted at the top of her lungs.
"HELP"
"HELP"
A ball of light crashed into her body.
Then she felt suffocated and a screen appeared. 
[System parasite commencing]
She felt pain like never before.
[Parasite installing.......Succeeded]
[Gaining control of soul.......Succeeded]
She suddenly was in a black room and saw a screen.
She wanted to move but was stuck as if a mountain was pressing on her. 
A ball of light suddenly lit and the pressure subsided.
[System commencing extermination of soul]
Dread washed over her body as she saw a small child about the size of a six year old. She couldn't see through the veil of death as every step the child stepped, she felt closer to the valley of death. 
"Please have mercy on me"
"No" 
The child suddenly used her arm to cut the woman in half.
The women still alive tried to fight back by pouncing on the child but to no avail as the child cut both her arms. 
Feeling the grasp of death grabbing on her neck. She smirked and chuckled.
"Its time for your death"
"Oh reall-"
The woman blew up with unrelenting force. The power started to disintegrate the child.
"How"
The last words of the child.
The women smiled at the dying child as information flowed through her mind.
She fainted.
[System 'Law System' has died in a battle of existence]
[World System shall give inheritance to relative.......Error] 
[Law system shall be exiled so that soul shall not gain power.......Error]
[Partial Law system is being reabsorbed into world system.......Success]
[ERROR ERROR]
[Compensation is needed. Transmigration and unparalleled talent is given as compensation.] 
[World shall be about cultivation as high compensation is needed.]
[Unparalleled talent shall be given as title {Unsurpassable martial weapon master}]
[World system shall not allow this lowly being to have power so heavy restrictions shall be given]
[Lowly being cannot cultivate in anyway.]
[Lowly being shall lose everything.]
[Processing and implementing...... Success]
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"Where am I" A child with a voice of a hourse voice sounded.
The child covered her mouth and immediately tried to find something to reflect on as she used a puddle, a face of a child about 3 years old but she knew she was 5 and seemed like this from malnurisment. The most mouth opening thing is that she was ugly, she seemed comparable to a donkey. She was shocked but suddenly information resurfaced and she cursed at all the information she remembered. 
She looked up and cursed in low murmurs as she laid down on the cave floor and slept as she was exhausted from her mind and soul.

(Hi, author here, first time writing, so the farther we go the more story concepts I try to add in the story, leading to this pile of burning stupidity called 'I can change the core principle.' 

Strap on your big boy/girl pants as you get absolutely violated by my terrible writing so I sincerely advice you to be the M that you never knew you were. Strip down and get whipped.)

(On a serious note, this whole novel is just a draft for a larger novel so if you find people becoming concepts being too ridiculous. You know what to do...... Flame me in the comments with one star reviews.)

Alternative Synopsis
Have You thought about the profoundness of a concept? What is a concept? It's a idea. Are there any limits to an idea? Non but physical. Then, are there ways to bypass the physical boundaries of your limited imagination? Spiritually. 

This is a novel exploring the idea to live a concept that is intricately tied to infinity. 

Is a system Ai from all those popular books the manifestation of an AI or are they the sad byproduct? I don't know. 

What is a Law? A concept fully formed. An idea fleshed out for the world to see. So when a cultivator bends a Law, those it follow the past or the future or the present. After all, an idea is something out the bounds of time and space. A idea is discovered not created. It is already existing.

I can change the core principles

'What's that and how are we doing that?'


'How are we making him sign a contract? I thought you destroyed his mind and soul? What happens when we combine?'


'...What? How do I go looking from five to thirty but nevermind as I don't really mind much. So does my strength increase?'


<Sadly, no as you just become more taller.>


'Maybe, I expect too much from you but we can start now.'


As she felt a arrow shoot through her metaphorical heart. She sighed and murmured


<Ok, let me take over. You just need to place your hand on his face again.>


In a place full of black, space started to distort as three ethereal and transparent figures were taking shape as each had a different look. 


A man was standing at six feet tall. His body was thin and malnourished as if the weakest wind can blow this tall man down. His face looked as if he was tired. 


A bright body appeared as it shines brightly taking the form of a young girl. Her whole body was not solid as it seemed to change once in a while. 


A young girl about 6 appeared as she looks naive and innocent. The eyes of the girl was yellow with a ugly appearance. Her hair was black. Her body was small compared to the man as she was only at the man's waist. 


Nobody was speaking as the man opened his  mouth


The young girl spoke as she looked at the man with her yellow eyes.


"The best part of beauty is that which no picture can express. But you also look ugly."


"People only call me ugly until they find out how much money I make. Then they call me ugly and poor."


"You two are ugly so can we move to our main topic. So what is your goal."


He looked puzzled as he blurted out his life goal like an idiot.


"Do you wish to fulfill this goal by sacrificing your soul, mind and body to me. You will follow me in my mind and if I fail I will give everything I and Tang Nuan have so tell me your choice."


The man was silent for a few moments as he sighed. He thought


'Not like I can return. As I have been discovered by the cultivators. If I return I will just become a cultivation pill and people are already hunting me down.'


She hands him the contract and as he took it, he felt his soul jolt. He felt danger on his soul as he tried to take his hand off. He stopped moving. 


The atmosphere went tense as he felt his death closer every second as he took the paper and bite his finger leaking a little soul. 


He was afraid. He wanted to leave. His finger starts to get closer to the paper as he read the contract but after he read it. He face eased up and he signed the contract. 


Deal with the devil