Reincarnated As A Bow (Not Updated)

Shameless Review. Will Try to do 1 chap/day. I will take suggestions, please do them. I do have a storyboard. I hope you all enjoy my story and vote for me :D

I haven't read the novel, I'll read it when the chapter count is over 60 XD, sometimes annoying when I'm curious and the next chapter hasn't been updated. I will give you 5 stars as encouragement, and please don't stop your story like the others

Love it I’ll continue to reaId I like the personality even if it is unreal to be just fine almost instantly with being a bow (an Item) I guess, this gets compensated by him not letting himself in to being just someones subordinate(-item). Furthermore I like the plot about him and his friend being reincarnated under different circumstances. Its nice to theorize about how they will continue once they find each other. Wish you sucess on the Novel and thanks for writing.

(note this may change as the story goes on it probably will but this is what I put now) I Like it good idea following the traits of reincarnation + system but with a new fresh breath good setup seems to have good potential I mean hope this read goes well and ill vote more power stones and being a bow really sets it out along with the amazing stability of updates (I've found stories that get 5 stars in everything except stability and its ANNOYING like 1 update from either 1 day-1 month so I love stability) I say 5 stars and don't you dare drop this. Take another free power stone! (: (I'm second place now I think)

i actually enjoyed this, especially having an material object as the main character. Cool features for a bow and some interesting development of the story. Even though its short, i am actually curious on where it would go.

Good Concept. Grammar errors and other small things, but other than that, 5/5. Has a lot of potential, I recommend. Good Luck, Author!!!!!!!

Read through the first ten chapters. I could see myself getting into the story more should the author take some time to clean up the first few chapters. There are huge blocks of text that build up things and often there are rapid system dialog flying past you. The interactions with the character and the system are what you would expect. There isn't much deviation from what I would see in the genre which left me wanting more. As far as the dialogue between characters it feels very robotic and stiff at times, where a lot of the characters don't have their own personalities and mimic the same tonality or response structure of others. I would relate this to something like "The Room". "Oh, Hi mark." "Hey dave." "How is your day going". Very one dimensional. The actual writing itself doesn't have many grammar mistakes, which was good since it made reading easier, but there are some sentence structure issues. I think you would benefit from something like Grammarly pro to help with this, and the huge walls of text. That said I hope the story continues to grow and can flourish from these suggestions!