Pioneer of Wizarding World
[A Harry Potter Fanfiction]
Alder Gray opened his eyes in a world both familiar and unfamiliar. He transmigrated to Harry Potter but seven years before the golden trio started Hogwarts. With the help of a system, which named itself Academic System, Alder's journey through wizarding world begins. Join Alder to discover if the existance of a system is merely a cheat, or a sign of great responsibility.
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Author's Notes:
I do not own any character other than my OCs.
Our first saga in the wizarding world will take place in 1984-1991, school years of our main character. A timeline which Hogwarts Mystery players may be familiar of. But most of the characters that has been added in the game are excluded.
I'm writing the novel because of my admiration for Harry Potter series and I also hope to create an escape from daily problems for both myself and readers of my novel. But daily life and my job may also limit the update frequency, thus it has no definite update schedule.
Last but not least, English is not my main language, be free to correct or warn me if you notice a mistake that disrupts your reading experience.
İt has potential. System is intrugung only thing i hope author doesnt mess it up. İts good story so far(ch7) am close to university exams. So hope when i return it has more chapters and author doesnt drop it
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Writing quality: 5 star Update: ok Story development: 2 star It' boring. Basically it's copy and paste the original story (without the golden trio). Character desing: 2 star World background: 0 star It's boring, there's no exploration of the Wizarding World. Mc follows the same route as the other 100,000,000 fanfics: 1.-Go to Diagon Alley 2.-Go to station 9 3/4 3.-train and Hogwarts 4.-classification 5.- Copy and paste story from the original book... the 7 years of study 😴😴😴😴 6.- The MC never knows what's beyond the walls of Hogwarts and Diagon Alley. 7.-Author abandoned the story because he too was bored.
looking at the date in the synopsis is love interest tonks? i still haven't read it, but if tonks is love interest than you will get a lot of stones, power stones. ok?
it's pretty good 👍 Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
I like the system bc it actually makes you work a bit. Nothing crazy so far but there is definitely potential. Curious to see where the story goes, hope we can get a bit of arcs in different countries.
so first 7 chapters.. was some what boring? i mean the story was ok grammar was ok too but nothing special who i dont have read.. even the system is not special just a system. maybe in the future the story will be better and deserve more stars.
It's really good needs more chapters to get a better feel of the story but it seems promising keep up the good work and plz don't drop as it's an enjoyable Harry Potter fanfic and the grammar is like 75% better then most novels on this site good job 👍
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İ m not a fan of the system but writer did pretty good job combined them both Harry Potter universe and system. İ only read 10 chapter and things getting more instresting step bu step
I've read many potter fanfics but I've only seen 1 other with a Hufflepuff MC and it was trash. this is very good so far. a decent system not to OP so far and I'm sending mcxdora romance but idk if that's the route author is taking. Overall good concept, decent world building and decent writing with not too many mistakes.
interesting story
pretty good so far.................................................................................................................................................................
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I am enjoying a lot this novel, the only downsides are the length of the chapters and the release schedule. But I guess the author is doing the best he can