The Puppet MC: Adriel’s Life is Controlled by Everyone Around Him

For now, it is very interesting. It is your usual Yandere novel that solely focused on Yanderes. But author writes multiple povs and they added a lot of flavours into the story, they made very interesting novel. Hope Author keeps up the pace and adds more Yanderes for MC. There are some mispronunciations but story is readable. For now, it's Five Stars

It's pretty hard to read most of the time. The Pov's are confusing and constantly changing. There is missing info so most of the conversations don't make sense. The plot premise also doesn't hold up very well. It looks like someone went through trying to edit it, failed miserably after messing everything up, and then just left. It's readable if you want to push yourself to your minds limits like a shounen protag but hey I'm not going to. It might get better if author starts reading over what he writes and stops doing things like repeating the same chapter twice. 1.5/5 since it can still be read. Barely.

this is my first story, it will focus on several yanderes, presenting it in a very interesting way hope you like it because I'm having a lot of fun writing it.[img=recommend]

hard to read and confusing and some of the chapter is just side characters POV and leo's harem which is pretty confusing i mean who is the MC leo or adrail i thought this novel is like Yuujin Character wa Taihen desu ka? but i guess it not

very interesting but put a auxiliary chapter of the characters and their roles example. (name)-is best friends with (name) and you need to type on who's pov you're using I'm so confused on wether we are on 3rd perspective or 1st person

hello author, I think what your trying to write is kinda naive right now, it's okay to have preference but I would suggest you to make the Mc much more better and smart it feels like the mc is an object for the girls to use... he just feels like a dumb mc... I would suggest that you should rewrite it whole with much more mc things taking place and making a world with explaining powers and then building up his yandere story. I do think you have an amazing mind and story for yandere types... although this is all my opinion. I hope to that you make a lot of growth with this story... ( this all is just my opinion... this is your novel author do as you like with it ). :) A 5/5 for the novel as I think making yandere requires a lot of effort.