Jeong-Hoon, the average, boring, teenage boy, who's living in a pathetic life, being bullied everyday, having no parents, barely surviving in this life. Recently, there was this new game that came out "The Crimson game". How will this change Jeong-Hoon's life?

The Crimson Game

ACTION

ADVENTURE

SYSTEM

COMEDY

OVERPOWERED

ISEKAI

DEVIL

LEVELUP

CONQUER

VIDEOGAME

Too much fast-pacing at the start of the novel. Also, it seems like you did a rush on this one. I just advise you to further research about your genre since this is a litrpg, you need to explain the world-building and not just straight to the game or something. Also, why was the MC inside the game all of the sudden? He played the game when his uncle brought him an xbox and played in the holidays and when he got back to school, the world became a game itself? I don't understand how that happen.

This novel has a potential. Just try to review it and revise your work. Keep writing and keep practicing. No one is perfect at the start. Hope my advise help you somehow ^_^