the most unlikely murder

the most unlikely murder

Fantasy18 Chapters20.7K Views
Author: whyshouldieven
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500 years ago the earth faced a new threat, transforming the world and unleashing new beasts upon the world. After 300 years of constant losses mankind finally got their chance in taming beasts, binding each other to contracts they worked together to push back, now 200 years later starts the story of Eric and the tale

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whyshouldieven
whyshouldieven

hello everyone why here to anyone looking to read this novel(in its current state) please try chapter 2 yes chapter 1 is a mess that I would like to hide under my stairs but I'm not at the level required to fix it yet I can promise it gets so much better in chapter 2 and beyond thank you for taking the time to read this and my novel

3 years ago
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SleepDeprivedSloth
SleepDeprivedSloth

Hmm, so let me start. The first chapter was a mess, like real real mess. too much info dump, Tbh I nearly fell asleep there. please change it a little. There are some minor grammar errors but that is unavoidable, so 4/5 on writing quality. Stability of updates: Well, 3-4 chaps a week is too low for me so, 3/5 there. Story development: Hmm, I have read till the beast tide chapter where the mc just tires himself out before the actual fight begins. The story seems interesting but not much has been done yet, 4/5 Character design: Well, tbh I really don't like the mc, he is too... idk depressed? I mean, just tell that in the synopsis, I don't like reading depressed mcs, my life is already sad enough, wouldn't want to add sadder things to it(but that is just my personal thinking) 3/5 World background: Well, normal apocalypse world, not much has been introduced but it seems okay. People can tame beasts here, so that's cool as well. 4/5 Well, that's it for me, as for the readers reading this, you can try this novel if you want. A cool story.

3 years ago
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Winter_Webb
Winter_Webb

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