lila adventure mid hogwarts year 1 draft(half finished)

hello to all my readers as it is gonna be explained in notice and schedule I realized I am an idea guy and while I think I can make a great skeleton for the story I am not so good in the more detailed parts of the story such character interaction so if there is somebody out there who is good at that maybe we could work together.

for now this draft show my ideas for the chapter which I will build on. you don't have to read it as is going to change but if you do please be honest and tell me what you think.

hello to all my readers as it is gonna be explained in notice and schedule I realized I am an idea guy and while I think I can make a great skeleton for the story I am not so good in the more detailed parts of the story such character interaction so if there is somebody out there who is good at that maybe we could work together.

PLEASE BE HONEST AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.

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Back in the Base

the mc and the test ware expecting to just pop in new bodies and tots seemed to noticed.

[while some one is down there the other who decide to go the new world would experience a speed up version of their lives.

in this case it would your mothers journey also don't worry once you gave your choices for reincarnation they are locked and will happen is just matter of how ]

Immediately after a screen began playing it was an egg Changing radically

[it would be 1 year to 1 hour it can be Changed but it need points and well... you poor. ]

I immediately,( while ignoring the last comment)i started thinking in what I could use the time and the first thing that came into my mind is I should ensure we have a happy home life and so i asked.

MC:Mary-Susan can you use what we have to make superpowers?

Sisters:maybe? for whom?

MC:For petunia

Sisters: yes! but how will you give to her?

MC:I can Share my inventory which is... (I told them what it is )

SiS:Incredable a portable independent space! but in that case maybe yes Scan!

as they said that a little ball floated from one their watches

and it scanned everything of the base space, the tools the materials, the plants, etc.

They huddle over the Drone once it finished and went through everything.

Mary: Susan with the time, tools, safety concerns and the time difference we should do a...

Susan:a compound of course, we should do a biological gas based one but should be change or...

Mary:of course it shouldn't change her it could be irreversible, we could use what we study from Dark Vegan.

Sis: Johnny,duke Bring us these marked object.

pointing to the drone marked item and as they did the girls started working on making a base, but it would need more materials to finish it and so I put it on a letter in my inventory and told Tots to notify Her.

[due to being a tutorial communication would be allowed usually it would be 1SP]

and so we waited.

Johnny and duke went exploring and finally got bored and settled on the computer where they found some of their favorite games.

we played some games together while the girls started using the kitchen and some of their tools to try to set up the base.

of course! with some break so we could all look at lila greatest hits:

her head getting stuck to the floor, her trying to eat the table and or chairs and so on, her mom prestige definitely took a hit.

I got a reply From lila

: Helrlo okrey lit mlu Df Thah( hello okey let me do that) and so during the next two hours I continue to receive materials which the girls used to complete the serum? we send it to lila along with an anti-serum and the corresponding instructions.

Petunia got her powers wich ware way more powerful then expected the girls had a predatory shine in their eyes when they saw that unexpected reaction.poor auntie she is going to get harasas for a while.

then we mostly stuck to seeing what she did.

I noticed how happy they ware when snape situation was solved and how happy they are for their aunty petunia.

And that is when:

CONGRATS YOU HAVE ACCOMPLISHED THE MISSIONS SISTER ENVY FOR HELPING PETUNIA AND CHILDHOOD PAIN FOR HELPING SNAPE.

MISSION UNLOCKED

SAVING: FOR EVERY PERSON SAVED YOU WOULD GET A REWARD ONCE YOU FINISH THIS TUTORIAL.

REWARDS

SISTER JEALOUSY ANCIENT FAMILY MAGIC- SISTERS BRANCH- INITIAL EDITION CHILDHOOD PAIN GIVES A SPECIFIED CHILDBIRTH RELATED SPELL.

Mc: Tots, send rewards.

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then for her first year there is gonna be bullying same magical classes as shown in the movies and some more as they are in war some fighting new friend and an imperceptible change in one of her friend