Funnys Funny Cum Over Rigels

it’s a very eventful story one which can’t be described but if i had to id say you did a great job writing this well done but you could do with some grammar to help with it like commas and fill stops

Bestest story ever. Needs more fights and more r@pe. Also rigels canonically doesn’t have parents, it was his sisters that got r@ped by funny

This is a complete masterpiece. The secound best thing i have ever seen, the first being Jojo's Bizzare Adventure Part 7 SBR. Compleatly peak i simply don't understand how you can make something this good.