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3 years ago
43
Cain_101
there are almost no grammar mistakes if that isn't enough for you to read then there are almost no spelling mistakes if this also didn't make you curious about this novel then it's story line will most certainly; I won't lie and say that this novel is perfect it has it's own flaws but it has much more potential to become something much bigger I have read until chapter 32 and so far I am totally sold
it's about a modern person somehow reincarnating in history and from there how it goes for him
But you will say what's new about that then let's just say that the history is of india and let's be real there are not that many novel with India's history if at all, so if you are tired of those novel with everything repetitive but you like those idea then this is something refreshing take on those just read at least more then 10 chapter's and I can guarantee that you will be hooked 👍
3 years ago
17
sam_dutt
I really liked it how the author started the story. It seems the store has great potential, so please regularly update the story, and don't drop the store in the middle. First time seeing a nice Indian story. Good luck....................
3 years ago
16
ASURA_KING
After I read tyranny of steal I always wanted similar novel about Indian culture .
2 years ago
6
Ductor_Storage
The best History fanfic I have read.I am a big fan of History and India's history so this is delight to read especially with the quality and no grammar mistakes.Just read it,i know you will enjoy.
2 years ago
6
Khizar_Kazi
from Pakistan. my first idea steam engine and how it push the fast forward button to Europe industrial time as steam engine used in almost every thing including trains ships.
second idea culinary utensils oven and various yummy foreign dishes salad 🥗 cheese production for making pizza lazania fried rice baking backry items etc
3rd ideas for diplomatic and trade relations to near civilizations like china and through navy development with help of pure steam engine or with old style hybrid ships to Japan and Arab Africa routes. bonus of providing safety of trade routes
as inventer of first bulb and telephone crude primary one
invention of first microscope and it's positive effects in development of medicine. creation intravenous injection or syringe production.
first crude method of penicillin antibiotic from fungus.
acquiring plants from which antimalarial drugs extracted and used
2 years ago
4
_D_OMNINOMAD
i been looking for a fanfic or something related to indian history or mythology happy to finally find it
3 years ago
4
KDS_6563
I liked the story mode .... and keep up the writing and good work. Nice seeing an indian book writer to write a good story . .. .love to read it further 💓💓💓☺️
3 years ago
4
Hema_Mutha
Nice. Good abd fresh content for the indian readers by an indian author. Keep up the good work.
Hope you continue to write and complete the story.
3 years ago
4
SolaceViolet
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
3
Believers
Finally a book about our Great Bharat ...
2 years ago
3
TeraBaapHuMai
delete it if u r from peacefull community
2 years ago
2
King_Ravan
I liked the story very much and the only problem for me is chapters are locked quite early ...............
2 years ago
2
RCV
Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on.
Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me:
Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though.
Story development: So far so good.
Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us.
World background: Similar issues.
All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.
Hi, the author here. please give a read and support the novel by giving your reviews. It will be a continuous updated story so support it. Thank You.
there are almost no grammar mistakes if that isn't enough for you to read then there are almost no spelling mistakes if this also didn't make you curious about this novel then it's story line will most certainly; I won't lie and say that this novel is perfect it has it's own flaws but it has much more potential to become something much bigger I have read until chapter 32 and so far I am totally sold it's about a modern person somehow reincarnating in history and from there how it goes for him But you will say what's new about that then let's just say that the history is of india and let's be real there are not that many novel with India's history if at all, so if you are tired of those novel with everything repetitive but you like those idea then this is something refreshing take on those just read at least more then 10 chapter's and I can guarantee that you will be hooked 👍
I really liked it how the author started the story. It seems the store has great potential, so please regularly update the story, and don't drop the store in the middle. First time seeing a nice Indian story. Good luck....................
After I read tyranny of steal I always wanted similar novel about Indian culture .
The best History fanfic I have read.I am a big fan of History and India's history so this is delight to read especially with the quality and no grammar mistakes.Just read it,i know you will enjoy.
from Pakistan. my first idea steam engine and how it push the fast forward button to Europe industrial time as steam engine used in almost every thing including trains ships. second idea culinary utensils oven and various yummy foreign dishes salad 🥗 cheese production for making pizza lazania fried rice baking backry items etc 3rd ideas for diplomatic and trade relations to near civilizations like china and through navy development with help of pure steam engine or with old style hybrid ships to Japan and Arab Africa routes. bonus of providing safety of trade routes as inventer of first bulb and telephone crude primary one invention of first microscope and it's positive effects in development of medicine. creation intravenous injection or syringe production. first crude method of penicillin antibiotic from fungus. acquiring plants from which antimalarial drugs extracted and used
i been looking for a fanfic or something related to indian history or mythology happy to finally find it
I liked the story mode .... and keep up the writing and good work. Nice seeing an indian book writer to write a good story . .. .love to read it further 💓💓💓☺️
Nice. Good abd fresh content for the indian readers by an indian author. Keep up the good work. Hope you continue to write and complete the story.
Reveal Spoiler
Finally a book about our Great Bharat ...
delete it if u r from peacefull community
I liked the story very much and the only problem for me is chapters are locked quite early ...............
Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on. Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me: Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though. Story development: So far so good. Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us. World background: Similar issues. All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.
Just don't drop this. You have my full support.