please reset the booktitle Kurotsuchi_01 20231218092329 45

please reset the booktitle Kurotsuchi_01 20231218092329 45

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Author: Kurotsuchi_01
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I've always thought I'd been wrong to push him away, have I ever been more wrong, why does it hurt when I see him with the bar lady?

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she_osprey
she_osprey

An interesting story with a good plotline, though you could work on the connects, it would be better than this. The paragraphing and the time skips, if you fix that, your story would be perfect.

3 years ago
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EddyTakaz
EddyTakaz

The storyline is captivating. The back and forth and varied perspectives makes it interesting. Definitely following along. Please do not pull your foot off the gas.

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