The synopsis was a good one, it was well written as well as the chapters. Characterization was also on point. The author also did good with the description.
It’s been a while since I read this type of novel though but I really enjoyed it and I highly recommend.
3 years ago
38
ACE_KinGz
Let see what u got 👌👌
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
3 years ago
13
lord_dark
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
10
Vitalic33
The story and character was all fine reading early on, but...
The way the mc has to bend to the will of system is one thing, but to force it in to a romance, or harem what ever it decides to, that's just throws the whole story development out the window!
Keep the system neutral or power hungry but not romance oriented that's just mehhh
3 years ago
8
Ceruleam_001
not gonna lie the character designs are really nice because I can imagine the characters quite easily. The chapters are constantly updated every day as well. there has been quit some development but I feel like with the current rate at which main character is developing he will reach the top of humanity in about 200 chapter so I wonder if you have any other new plots like fights in space and stuff and the main character being able to destroy planets. the character development I feel like the main character went through some progress in his cold behavior. I am not sure about the world building so I put a 4 stars. Overall a very nice light novel and you should read it
3 years ago
7
Iamfavour
A very good and interesting book, I find it intriguing .... I like the MC and how he is eager to get stronger..The plot is great. The author should always proofread the chapters before publishing.. and update stability should be stable. Above all, the book is recommendable.
3 years ago
4
HAHHAHAHahha
has the author considered passive abilites or effect powered by mana
which would lend sognificant power if the effects were able to be stacked
( keep up the chaps u cen do it!!!!!!!)
3 years ago
3
Noctifer_05
Did Author just dropped the book???
I mean, he tells us not to read it in the description. Then, why should I bother to even look inside?????????????????????????????????
2 years ago
2
Riebee
The author/translator is a tool. Contsantly adding junk to the chapters for word count. Dropped the story midway and started a second story. I barely made it past chapter 60 before getting fed up. Thankfully I wasted nothing but time due to the free 24 hour bonus.
Do not waste your time with this person or thier works.
2 years ago
2
Allen_Monk
Should be removed, even the caption can tells you such.
7 months ago
1
bubblesjoe
can be skipped. good premise, but childish attempt. should be more rational yet sounds like stuck with 10 year olds
2 years ago
1
mujo404
WELL LETS SEE.WRITING QUALITY 5
STABLILTY 3
STORY DEV 3
CHARACTER DESIGN 5
WORLD BACKGROUND 5
2 years ago
1
Sir_Harven
It's trash, even with infinite mana mc still stupid, feels like those generic chinese novel but they change the names to western and make it magic/mana instead of ki
2 years ago
1
loleargon
should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named magic academy I have infinite skill points.
2 years ago
1
Beagle_Girl
The stories you’ve started are all well written! I enjoyed reading them! Though I would feel disappointed each time it moved onto the next story, I got immersed into the next one soon after! If you ever decide to continue/finish any of them, I’d definitely come back to read them!
Updating stability and story development are only lower due to not completing the stories, otherwise I’d rate five stars for everything.
The synopsis was a good one, it was well written as well as the chapters. Characterization was also on point. The author also did good with the description. It’s been a while since I read this type of novel though but I really enjoyed it and I highly recommend.
Let see what u got 👌👌 Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Reveal Spoiler
The story and character was all fine reading early on, but... The way the mc has to bend to the will of system is one thing, but to force it in to a romance, or harem what ever it decides to, that's just throws the whole story development out the window! Keep the system neutral or power hungry but not romance oriented that's just mehhh
not gonna lie the character designs are really nice because I can imagine the characters quite easily. The chapters are constantly updated every day as well. there has been quit some development but I feel like with the current rate at which main character is developing he will reach the top of humanity in about 200 chapter so I wonder if you have any other new plots like fights in space and stuff and the main character being able to destroy planets. the character development I feel like the main character went through some progress in his cold behavior. I am not sure about the world building so I put a 4 stars. Overall a very nice light novel and you should read it
A very good and interesting book, I find it intriguing .... I like the MC and how he is eager to get stronger..The plot is great. The author should always proofread the chapters before publishing.. and update stability should be stable. Above all, the book is recommendable.
has the author considered passive abilites or effect powered by mana which would lend sognificant power if the effects were able to be stacked ( keep up the chaps u cen do it!!!!!!!)
Did Author just dropped the book??? I mean, he tells us not to read it in the description. Then, why should I bother to even look inside?????????????????????????????????
The author/translator is a tool. Contsantly adding junk to the chapters for word count. Dropped the story midway and started a second story. I barely made it past chapter 60 before getting fed up. Thankfully I wasted nothing but time due to the free 24 hour bonus. Do not waste your time with this person or thier works.
Should be removed, even the caption can tells you such.
can be skipped. good premise, but childish attempt. should be more rational yet sounds like stuck with 10 year olds
WELL LETS SEE.WRITING QUALITY 5 STABLILTY 3 STORY DEV 3 CHARACTER DESIGN 5 WORLD BACKGROUND 5
It's trash, even with infinite mana mc still stupid, feels like those generic chinese novel but they change the names to western and make it magic/mana instead of ki
should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named magic academy I have infinite skill points.
The stories you’ve started are all well written! I enjoyed reading them! Though I would feel disappointed each time it moved onto the next story, I got immersed into the next one soon after! If you ever decide to continue/finish any of them, I’d definitely come back to read them! Updating stability and story development are only lower due to not completing the stories, otherwise I’d rate five stars for everything.