In an age where the Gods have all but forsaken humanity, we watch over the struggle of a lone human rise to take on the waves alone. Will he survive, and save humanity, or will he too fall victim to the endless sea. Join us in this testament of pain.
Amazing introduction and character writing develops a great art and design in mind and how the character moves and act with a certain tinge of feeling attached to it, and gives off an explorational and adventure vibes recommended and has a lot of potential!
honestly great plot, great introduction and characters from what I’ve seen so far, looking forward to any new chapters. 100% worth your time
This story has a lot of potential to be honest. It has good world building, an interesting storyline and most of all seems different. I am really impressed. Keep up the good work 😁
I like it so far. Great World background (because it based off of Deep/Rogue so i already know a lot). Updates seem good so far but i wouldnt know because its only been 2 chapters. Writing Quality is great, but i gave it 4/5 because its not perfect. Story Development is a bit fast but good so far. I had to give Character Design a 3/5 because there isnt much known about what he looks like besides the hair and that he might be a Azeal because he's Roy haru.
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Good pacing. Not a lot of show-and-tell, which ruins some dramatic scenes (I prefer some suspense in the protagonist's traumatic memory despite being first-person).
Not entirely sure how to rate this, although its all either 4 or 5 stars. Nice story told from a charming perspective. So far a short but interesting read. Definitely nice to have a fictional world that I enjoy a lot personified into a book. Hope the next chapters are good too!
I loved it. That's all I can say. No inconsistencies, slightly irregular chapter releases but the story is original, and gripping. Has some great potential, and I hope the author continues to release chapters.
the author did great in the first chaps, loved the writing style qnd alsi the characters they have depth in them. the fact that i real all the thqt pro e how much the story is captivating and page turner.. it is the beginning of something big and i am so excited to continue reading
The 1st chapter had my head spinning and the 2nd chapter just blew it. Need regular updates so you better keep writing. And what more can I say? dang this 140 words mandatory words. peace:
This is a hidden gem. Its really good, easy to follow with some amazing lore. It only has a few chapters and the update stability is a bit off but it's worth reading 100%
Loved it. So many references to popular games, love the Lovecraftian world building, and the emotions that feel REAL. Has some great potential, and I sincerely hope that the author doesn't drop it. My only complaint is the update stability, but now that he's feeling better, i hope they come more often!
writing quality and characters introduction was nice, authors description is easy to follow, not too complex but simple 👍 the world building needs to be focused more on based on my opinion but you've got the rest going good !
Dont know what to say since its only have 3 chapter but i like the writing It take me a while to realize the world concept is not the same as rogue/dw, it might be kinda confusing for rogue player at first but cool
Nothing to say. Good overall, i love the story, even though i know the writer, he is kinda lazy ;) I wish he can put more effort into it, and that would be perfect. I heard about the next chapters, you guys are not ready.