Naruto: Challenger system

Whoever says this fanfic is good is a liar. Almost every character is overly annoying for no reason, and the MC has the emotional intelligence of a 10 year old. Not to mention the author is a ret@rd, who ignores all readers who try and give him suggestions.

After the first few chapters I can say that I find the idea behind it very good. The character is a bit too much unfinished for me and the Bloodline Uchia, Otsousuki is in itself, from the lore and personally from my point of view moronic stupid. The writing style is okay, so not overly good or bad. If the balancing stays as it is, I would happily follow the story. PLs don't drop it

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