My Gaia System

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This is well written and very creative. Already, I am predicting the future and pondering the past. I already have the need to reach through and grab the boy to bring him to a better place, to give him something he obviously doesn’ remember. I can’t wait to read more.t

This novel is good,the grammar is perfect with no error The story flows very well,from how he tried to survive and to how he got the system The setting is also very good,The author definitely did a good job

My Gaia System was fast-paced, engaging and suspenseful. It has all the elements a book should have such as suspense, action and a tinge of comedy ( dark in this case ).  At the end of the last chapter, Ive grown to like the characters especially Terran. He was a unique disturbed creepy MC I never thought I would like. I would recommend My Gaia System to anyone. Read My Gaia System! I promise, you’ll be hooked.

Here’s my Comprehensive Review(I use /10 but since you can’t rate like that, I’ll be rounding up) Writing Quality- 9.5, basically a 10 Updating Stability- The author told me he has a decently large stockpile, so we can expect daily updates minimum. 10/10 Story Development- Although it’s very early on in the story, the pacing is really good, and it felt smooth imo so 7.8-8.2/10 Character Design- Sophie hasn’t really been expanded upon YET(due to the lack of chapters out currently), but the MC is pretty good, and feels like a person so 7.3/10(4/5 in WN rating) World Background- nothing yet, I usually just give a default of 8 if it’s too early on in the story, BUT it seems interesting so far, and there’s a possibility of it being based on (partly)Greek Mythology, which could be really interesting.

The novel is a good one. Its simple with appropriate pausing and speeding. The main character is just as amazing, with his special way of thinking about life. I think the author should improve on his world description though. I think a more vivid description about the world will do even though the novel is just starting. It can be a hidden gem. Good work.

This is definitely a good novel, perfect grammar, the characters are well immersed in the story, the story is flowing and well thought plot. I recommend this to anyone who reads my review.

Haven't read a book so calmly for a long while. I don't know, but I felt calm while reading it. I go give it to your English. It's excellent. The emotions and relations were well shown. In every chapter, I couldn't wait to know what happened that got in into such a place. Nice book you got there author. I highly recommend.

Wonderful survival story! It is great to see that the MC is slowly crawling up from what remains from the apocalypse. Good to see that he gets well-deserved help! Five stars definitely, well-written and I find no grammatical mistakes 🙂 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Well written worth reading this system building novel. I can feel the patience and clarity in this work, which is hard to find these days. I really appreciate and highly recommend your work.

Hi, Author here shamelessly leaving 5-stars. ^_^ This is my WPC #290 system entry. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated! Thank you for reading!

Really strong start! I love the good writing, you can easily picture the world in your mind. Has a bit of a Hokuto no Ken vibe, which I like. Keep up the good work!

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Love the story so far. Has great potential. I really like the start. The author is really good at describing the emotions of the main character and you can actually feel his pain and loneliness. So far the system seems to be going in an interesting direction and the world seems interesting enough! I have high hopes