Bloody Saint
It started with a movie and it doesn't seem to end.
She was just a normal girl trying to sort out her problems.
She just started having friends, dreamt of college and escaping the house from the people she called family, maybe having a simple love life, it was on her wish list at least the last thing but then her story changed overnight, the crazy head that almost brought her to her death.
The help he asked for costing her more than she could handle, even her heart but he doesn't seem to care about those tribal things, pathetic wasn't she, every ladies dream was him.
The almighty SEBASTIAN.
the one with the cold heart and mesmerising smile.
He is none other than the bloody one
you can't blame him still, he was still holy.
she was torn between staying and leaving, he had taken her heart away when he was talking his shirt of her.
But he was supposed to have a mate who wasn't her, she was from another world, another time and another everything entirely.
"Horrors involved"
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editing done by me.
The pacing is fine and the story is lit! I can say it has potential. With the narration so well defined and detailed, this novel sure is enjoyable to read. It only needs some slight edits and we are good to go! Keep it up! I will support you all the way! [img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap]
The synopsis is surely captivating. I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. The plot is also interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
Very good book, I’d recommed it.each chapter is lit. well done author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I found the way the story started off to be quite interesting and funny. Like the FL a lot - her expressions, her internal dilemmas.....very funny and relatable. Should go back and edit the chapters already uploaded. some minor mistakes in punctuations and word capitalizations. Keep up the good work. :)
This novel has potential! The plot is so good. The way the characters carry their emotions, the author did a great job making the readers immersed in them. However, the grammar department needs a little work BUT overall, I would say this is a great novel. Great Job author! More chapters to come and I am here for it!
A very very good story by a promising author,I hope you won't relent to give more of what you've got .. I will be more anxious to know what's next of the story Keep it up 👍
Overall a very promising story! The beginning began with an exciting plot line, and the subsequent chapters were also cliffhangers in their own rights. However, I would advise for you to proofread a bit (I gave writing quality a 4/5). Especially, most sentences had capitalization errors, and there were often issues with punctuation as well. I think reading over your chapters once after writing them would help improve these errors drastically. But other than that, pacing and story design is great! Good luck!
keep up the good work author👍👍👍👍such an interesting story with an intriguing plot, a must recommendable book for reading am certainly leaving a five star
Buckle up y'all. Seems like we're going to be on a journey for this one... I'm reading it right now and let me just say that Ch2 was a short one, but it was also the one that hooked me in because I was upset it was so short, that I wanted to read more! Author, I'm not sure how you did that, but it worked. And now I'm attached.
Be warned! this story is so good .you will be crying once you've caught up and have to wait for daily updates. great work author keep it up .
Heyy 👋, this is the author🌚 This isn't my first book on here, but this is the one I hope to be constant with, if you like the first few chaps please do me a favour of voting and giving a honest review 😊, will surely try my best to bring more fun into the book. Thank you for your time. peace ✌. 🥰
wow! This is really good! The character development is very creative, though you need to update with more chapters. But overall, this is pretty good! the story progression and character build-up is great![